Comment from The Mom/DarleneThomson

Excellent

Your writing is powerful and shows all the glory of the season. I love Autumn it is my favorite time of year. Thank you for painting such a beautiful picture. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2015

Thank you so much for your positive feed back on my nonet. I really appreciate it.

Comment from MelB

Excellent

The changing colors are beautiful in the artwork, as well as in the fall season.
Spot on syllable count.
Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2015

Thanks for the excellent review.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

The changing of the guard from summer to autumn with the colors transition. Nicely done in this colorful and interesting nonet.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2015

Thanks for your excellent review and kind comments.

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

As this is the last entry to read in the voting booth, I found the one I will vote for as this was lovely and beautifully expressed. Perfect nonet form.

Teresa

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2015

Thanks Teresa for your encouraging review with great comments.

Comment from Benjamin Valencia

Excellent

Hello. I enjoyed your post because of its simplicity to deliver one word to describe the changing season, 'magic.' Good luck in the contest. Cheers.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2015

Thank you Benjamin for your encouraging review.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello :)

Beautiful nonet about nature. The picture is breath taking and it goes well with the presentation of your nonet. Good job with the syllable count. Well done!
~gypsy

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2015

Thanks Gypsy for your excellent review and best wishes,

Comment from flylikeaneagle

Excellent

Mystery writer: beautiful photo and message of changes. I like the greenness of summer and then the autumn colors. We can write or paint the beauty by our pen or paint brush. Great entry!! flylikeaneagle

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2015

thanks for your excellent review and wonderful comments I appreciate.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Good image, format, and presentation for your poem.
-I like the rhyme you use and the effective imagery.
-A few of them are:
"to the lush green shrubs a fresh hew"
"the autumn colours" as seen by the artist lets the reader picture some of them in their mind.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2015

Thanks for the great review and excellent comments.

reply by Pam (respa) on 10-Sep-2015

You are welcome.

Comment from Jeanie Mercer

Excellent

This is a lovely nonet, with good rhymes, nice flow and neat presentation. [tiny nitpick: In line 2, "hew" should be spelled HUE. In line 7, "artists" should have an apostrophe for the possessive [ARTISTS'] Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2015

Thanks Jeanie for the helpful review and great comments.

Comment from anabellapongasi

Excellent

This is a nice nonet in good form, spot on line and syllable count. Lovely imagery of
the start of autumn. Best to you in the contest.
Blessings,
Anabella

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2015

Thanks Anabella for your very encouraging review and best wishes.