"The Gift of Life Two."
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Comment from EMB
This definitely shows pain and loss and frustration, along with other crippling emotions. You employed rhyming, but this piece would sing, even without it. Glad you're still with us, my friend.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2015
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This definitely shows pain and loss and frustration, along with other crippling emotions. You employed rhyming, but this piece would sing, even without it. Glad you're still with us, my friend.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2015
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Thanks so much for that EMB.
Ricky 1024.
Comment from Christof McTarnahan
I can relate to suicide attempts and constantly thinking of death. I can also relate to feeling like you are going out of your fucking mind. Take that darkness and use it as the ink in your pen. Write what you feel and do not hold back. Let go off some of that anger...poison the world the way it poisoned you (or not..its your choice). Good writing.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2015
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I can relate to suicide attempts and constantly thinking of death. I can also relate to feeling like you are going out of your fucking mind. Take that darkness and use it as the ink in your pen. Write what you feel and do not hold back. Let go off some of that anger...poison the world the way it poisoned you (or not..its your choice). Good writing.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2015
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Thanks Christol.
I only talk about that subject with a 'Subject" who may gain something from it.
Ricky 1024.
And here is one of about a hundred Rose Poems.
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A poem and song to Nina on national Poets Day{tomorrow}
Roses Are So Red
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"Roses are red and violets are blue Nina and...
"I think that I am going out of my head...
"Over you but if roses are so red and violets are so, so, blue...
"And I think that I am going out of my head...
'Over you then why, why Nina do I now cry and why Nina do I die...
"Over you?"
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"Of course Violets are so, so. blue and roses are red and I am going...
"Out-of-my-head over you because..
"My love for You is greater then the Gravitational pull of the Earth...
"To the Sun, the Moon, the Planets and the Stars...
"And even the Planet of Mars...
"But God is greater then even this beautiful words Angel...
"And Nina when I look into your beautiful eyes..
'My Love for you must now....
"Realize!"
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Comment from Benjamin Valencia
HI Ricky1024. I hope this was fiction, because it sounds too real. I didn't quite get the 'major' in this. I was told about the use of 'as' a lot in my own writing too. I'm sure you will too. I think there's an 'as' mob around which is good. Take care Ricky and I'm looking forward to reading more of your work. Cheers.
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HI Ricky1024. I hope this was fiction, because it sounds too real. I didn't quite get the 'major' in this. I was told about the use of 'as' a lot in my own writing too. I'm sure you will too. I think there's an 'as' mob around which is good. Take care Ricky and I'm looking forward to reading more of your work. Cheers.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2015
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No Benjamin, I didn't hit the promote button as there are two more chapters left at home.
They will be presented today.
Thanks,
Ricky 1024.