Yes I Hear You Knocking
But do I let you in28 total reviews
Comment from Challah1202
This bears examination. I read it with interest and then reread it. You say you saw this coming. Why would you repeat a lesson you've already learned? I'm not trying to reunite you or act as an advocate. Write on.
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This bears examination. I read it with interest and then reread it. You say you saw this coming. Why would you repeat a lesson you've already learned? I'm not trying to reunite you or act as an advocate. Write on.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2016
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello A TARNISHED KNIGHT
Sorry I'm late reading you poem
(yes way behind)
Good poem making the reader wondering if you are going to open the door for this sorrful lady; especially when she said-
Yes, I hear you knocking
But should I let you in
Said you found another love
You're already over him
Gert
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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Hello A TARNISHED KNIGHT
Sorry I'm late reading you poem
(yes way behind)
Good poem making the reader wondering if you are going to open the door for this sorrful lady; especially when she said-
Yes, I hear you knocking
But should I let you in
Said you found another love
You're already over him
Gert
Comment Written 01-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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Thank you so much Gert I too am way behind in reading writing and replying ..I need to get back on the ball before I forget how to write lol
TK
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your poem. It has great rhyme and rhythm. The message is strong--one that many feel and have dealt with in the past. The picture is perfect. I see no changes.
Good job and thanks for sharing. [you have been away for some time??]
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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I enjoyed your poem. It has great rhyme and rhythm. The message is strong--one that many feel and have dealt with in the past. The picture is perfect. I see no changes.
Good job and thanks for sharing. [you have been away for some time??]
Comment Written 31-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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Thank you much Janny...Yes been away for a while trying to get back again Hope this one wakes my muse up lol
TK
Comment from Treischel
Well,naps they say, "once bit, twice shy". So you caution is understandable. Of course there's always room for forgiveness and second chances too. So, you either have to follow your heart or your gut. Tough choice. Great poem.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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Well,naps they say, "once bit, twice shy". So you caution is understandable. Of course there's always room for forgiveness and second chances too. So, you either have to follow your heart or your gut. Tough choice. Great poem.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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Thank you Mr T.. Trying to wake my muse up from too long of a nap..That can be tough at times I have found
TK
Comment from boxergirl
Knock knock who's there? Better beware....just kidding. Great job with your poem about 2nd guessing a former lover's intentions. Never give up more of yourself than you are willing to lose...at least that is what Dr. Phil says. 8-)
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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Knock knock who's there? Better beware....just kidding. Great job with your poem about 2nd guessing a former lover's intentions. Never give up more of yourself than you are willing to lose...at least that is what Dr. Phil says. 8-)
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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HI BG Thank you much for reading and commenting on this Been away for awhile searching for my lost moose Than found out it was not a moose I was looking for but my muse I finally realized that when I discovered there are no Moose in Hawaii hehehe
TK
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Haha...none in Arkansas either. 8-)
Comment from Pili Pubul
Did you let her in???? No self control my friend.... Love the poem
seem very realistic , good style and imagery, always a knight... Hehe
I don't come around much , no motivated, but glad I stop today...
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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Did you let her in???? No self control my friend.... Love the poem
seem very realistic , good style and imagery, always a knight... Hehe
I don't come around much , no motivated, but glad I stop today...
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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Thank you much Pili...My trouble is I am always trying to a damsel in distress and that gets me in trouble all the time hehehe
tk
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Hehehe...
Comment from pharp
TK,
I have missed your beautiful poems, you are back better than ever and haven't missed a beat. This is an exceptional piece of poetry. Excellent rhyming and rhythm and very smooth flow. A most enjoyable read and she can just keep on knocking but I wouldn't let her in. I think there was a song by Lil-Richie called "Keep a knocking but you can come in". Thanks for sharing my friend.....Blessings........Portia
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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TK,
I have missed your beautiful poems, you are back better than ever and haven't missed a beat. This is an exceptional piece of poetry. Excellent rhyming and rhythm and very smooth flow. A most enjoyable read and she can just keep on knocking but I wouldn't let her in. I think there was a song by Lil-Richie called "Keep a knocking but you can come in". Thanks for sharing my friend.....Blessings........Portia
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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Thank you soooo much Portia for the 6 and lovely comments... It seems my moose got lost and I was trying to find it again Then I realized there are no moose in Hawaii just muse's hehehe Ok ok muse when said fast kinda sounds like moose NO?
TK
Comment from Louise Michelle
Hey T.K.,
Want my advice? Make her 'knock on the door' at least several times before you trust her, LOL.
She could just be on the rebound and remembering how good she had it with your protagonist. Time will tell.
Hugs,
Lou
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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Hey T.K.,
Want my advice? Make her 'knock on the door' at least several times before you trust her, LOL.
She could just be on the rebound and remembering how good she had it with your protagonist. Time will tell.
Hugs,
Lou
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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Thanks much Louise.. Glad it was just a figment of my past that came to me not a now situation ... Too old to hear that knocking on my door anymore
Hugs
TK
Comment from misscookie
This one I sure some readers can relate.
Like the old saying goes fool me once shame on me
Fool me twice shame on you. Who in there right mind would take another change on this fool.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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This one I sure some readers can relate.
Like the old saying goes fool me once shame on me
Fool me twice shame on you. Who in there right mind would take another change on this fool.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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Thank you so much MC. Sorry I have been away for a while and been very late in replying and also reviewing Hope that is in the past and I can start again
HUGS
TK
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Welcome back. As I always say our life doesn't consist around F/s...LOL
Have a blessed day.
Cookie
Comment from justafan
No... Don't let her back in!!! If you weren't good enough the first time.. You won't be the second either :(
This is another beautiful work of art you have created Sir Knight.
Have missed your hauntingly beautiful work.
Always,
Missy
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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No... Don't let her back in!!! If you weren't good enough the first time.. You won't be the second either :(
This is another beautiful work of art you have created Sir Knight.
Have missed your hauntingly beautiful work.
Always,
Missy
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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Thank you my haunting beauty Lady M
Hugs
tk