"The House of Suffering"
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Miracles Will Come True But Knot2 U "A book about tragic events in my life and this wor
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Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
You are always true to you, my friend. Your mix of prose and poetry is intriguing and once one gets used to your unique writing style, it is a pleasurable read generally filled with some important social awareness issue. Nicely done and I thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2015
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You are always true to you, my friend. Your mix of prose and poetry is intriguing and once one gets used to your unique writing style, it is a pleasurable read generally filled with some important social awareness issue. Nicely done and I thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2015
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My Jay piece will blow that AWAY.
"Broken Angel"
RICKY...
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This was creative and different which I'm learning to expect from you. I like when you suddenly turned this into a poem! Great job as always.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2015
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This was creative and different which I'm learning to expect from you. I like when you suddenly turned this into a poem! Great job as always.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2015
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Thanks Mike.
Read on and go to my place...
Ricky1024
Comment from prettybluebirds
What a strange way to write a story. I must admit that it appealed to me anyway. I am glad this is a fiction story or it would be pretty sad. I liked the use of the word knot in place of not. A unique style of writing. Good work
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2015
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What a strange way to write a story. I must admit that it appealed to me anyway. I am glad this is a fiction story or it would be pretty sad. I liked the use of the word knot in place of not. A unique style of writing. Good work
Comment Written 25-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2015
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"Sorry prettybluebirds but I forgot to change that Font.
" It is corrected with additional foot note to help you understand"
Ricky1024