Comment from Albertholden

Exceptional

What a depressing read. The author has taken symbols of loved events and turned them into evil. The mental picture of the turkey suffering is very hurtful. I found the work fascinating, but painful. Perhaps this is the author's goal. He has definitely achieved it.

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2016

Thanks and just completed...
"Tripe Suicide Dancer!"
Ricky
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Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

Sometimes we have to face the fact that life only doles out what we choose - if you make bad decisions you will wind up with the pits. Nicely done and I thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2015

Thanks! as always yours...
Ricky1024

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

How very true, ask for a cherry get rotten fruit. Never fails. Well written story draws readers into the scene where they can experience all the events unfolding around them.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2015

Thanks Bret as this was a fun write and helps with my grieve.
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Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

sounds a bit creepy and weepy I do not want to step on foot near this story it might be Satan himself and he gives me the creeps to begin with

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2015

Thanks country ranch writer and I just posted the reason for the book!
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