Act of Endurance
Viewing comments for Chapter 83 "Whispers"Dawn of Chaos
5 total reviews
Comment from prettybluebirds
Well, this is certainly something different to read. I didn't quite understand the meaning until I read your footnotes. The artwork is perfect and compliments the writing.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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Well, this is certainly something different to read. I didn't quite understand the meaning until I read your footnotes. The artwork is perfect and compliments the writing.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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Glad aspects of this write was found pleasing. Good tap about footnotes. Thanking you for your generous rate and splendid views.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks just thoughts about the unseen, black cast tricks of shadows, form of life not known, might exist and whisper; well worded, well done. KEEP WRITING, INSPIRE CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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This speaks just thoughts about the unseen, black cast tricks of shadows, form of life not known, might exist and whisper; well worded, well done. KEEP WRITING, INSPIRE CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 07-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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Ghost has become an interest to me, aiding my biblical studies. Thanking you for your generous rate and comforting comments.
Comment from apky
I think your poem depicts both your convictions - scientist-leaning as well as religios-leaning - and in that become very interesting. No wonder even your artwork which complements your piece very well, has that spectre of a horse:
As, I look the curtain to hang rose,
snap it a whip pop in front my nose,
feelings a felt hose of utterances.
I know I saw a misty form movement,
capturing in ear a tone low it heard,
flow of a cold chill go by of a body.
I did indeed enjoy the read.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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I think your poem depicts both your convictions - scientist-leaning as well as religios-leaning - and in that become very interesting. No wonder even your artwork which complements your piece very well, has that spectre of a horse:
As, I look the curtain to hang rose,
snap it a whip pop in front my nose,
feelings a felt hose of utterances.
I know I saw a misty form movement,
capturing in ear a tone low it heard,
flow of a cold chill go by of a body.
I did indeed enjoy the read.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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Pits still plague my writes, constant revision are beginning to crack some light. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching thoughts.
Comment from poetadeu
First of all. I hope your book does well.
Mysteries are a big hit as questioning
minds want to know. You have a little
mystery going on here and it makes a
good late night read for those who are
into the unseen. Good luck.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2015
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First of all. I hope your book does well.
Mysteries are a big hit as questioning
minds want to know. You have a little
mystery going on here and it makes a
good late night read for those who are
into the unseen. Good luck.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2015
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A wonderful statement too many pits yet I can't give up the flame. Thanking you for generous rate and welcomed thoughts.
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Best wishes to you! LOL::}}Joyce
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Best wishes to you! LOL::}}Joyce
Comment from Unspoken94
What I liked about this piece was the description by the character of his/her experience of being in the presence of this "force." What I was not impressed with was the description of this experience. It seemed made up but not experienced. It did not seem authentic. I have had enough experience in this area to always be suspicious of those who say they have as well. I am not judging this piece but I am challenging it. More could be given to this experience. You have an excellent talent of writing about this and I give you my best value. -Bill Stephenson
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2015
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What I liked about this piece was the description by the character of his/her experience of being in the presence of this "force." What I was not impressed with was the description of this experience. It seemed made up but not experienced. It did not seem authentic. I have had enough experience in this area to always be suspicious of those who say they have as well. I am not judging this piece but I am challenging it. More could be given to this experience. You have an excellent talent of writing about this and I give you my best value. -Bill Stephenson
Comment Written 24-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2015
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Truly said and indeed a revision could bring out more you are right its made up another good point for me. Thanking you for generous rate and right on direction.