Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

All good thoughts, well expressed in your poem. Kindness is the one that stands out for me. How much better the world would be if we all treated others as we wish to be treated.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2015

Thanks BeasPeas. For your kind review and in the ideal world who knows but kindness is one of the nicest things to do . Had fun writing this a challenge but enjoyable Big Cheers

Comment from kittykatnoel

Excellent

You have presented a plethora of lovely sentiments each starting with a letter of the alphabet in order. Nicely done. The image also goes hand in hand with the theme. Well written.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2015

Thank you kittykatnoel for your review and lovely comments it is really appreciated Cheers

Comment from ellie6

Excellent

A good interpretation of the theme. It must be difficult to think of all the words required. An uplifting and warming post. Well done.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2015

Thanks Ellie for reading and reviewing this post and for your lovely comments. First time for this style interesting challenge Cheers

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Imagine~
wonderful poem using all the letters of the alphabet, not an easy thing to do and you pulled of beautifully -Good job! Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2015

Thanks so much Gypsy Blue Rose, nothing ventured, nothing gained so glad for your encouraging words Cheers

Comment from Shirley B

Exceptional

This is a very nice poem. As I was reading your poem, I was singing the song in my mind. I always smile at people every day. It makes me feel better. It is such a small thing to do. Best of luck to you in the contest. Great job, Shirley

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2015

Woe Shirley Thank you so much for you 6 stars what a lovely surprise and very much appreciated. I am so glad you were inspired by my poem to do so .Yes smiling cost nothing and it makes such a difference. And this song of John Lennons is inspirational and still as relevant ( if not more so today) with many thanks again and also for your good wishes in the contest. With Cheers for a great day for you

Comment from royowen

Excellent

In an ideal world this is true, what you have declared in this well written, idealistic poem! Then mankind is tribal by nature, that is essentially why we have patriotism adhering to one community, I like the quote:- "the world is my country" Thomas Paine, more to it than that, which is what we should cling to, if global unity is what we desire! Nicely scribed in eloquent language. You cleverly and articulately combined the letters of the alphabet into a poem, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2015

Thank you Roy yes my words are idealistic but I try to live by them as much as possible and indeed the world is our country .we just need to take care of it so glad you stopped by to read this and give me a lovely review and good wishes Many Cheers to you

reply by royowen on 20-Aug-2015

My utmost pleasure

Comment from LeslieP5

Excellent

I like your choice of topic for the rather difficult poetic form. Your individual lines all are relevant to improving one's outlook and creating a better world. Imagine by John Lennon, is a good inspiration for this poem.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2015

Thank you Leslie. Thanks for your feedback and lovely review . Yes Jon Lennon has left a great legacy. Have a great day . Cheers

Comment from SilentNinja2930

Excellent

You did great on this poem, and it appears you followed the contest rules. Your work speaks of equality and peace throughout the land. "Imagine" by John Lennon is one of my favorite songs; it's cool that you were inspired by it. The only grammatical problem I saw was in the line "Love one an other like there's no tomorrow". You just need to put "an other" together into one word, but other than that, you've got this down. Awesome job, and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2015

Thanks so much Silent Ninja2930 for your positive and encouraging review, I wasn't sure how this would go but you have reassured me that it is Ok. So appreciate your comments and I will fix that line ASAP. Cheers

Comment from Tessa Kay

Excellent

Every line in this poem could stand on its own, be a thought for the day A-Z
Found just one little point:
-Gain a health respect for life - did you mean healthy?
All the best in the contest :)

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2015

Thank you very much Tessa Kay for your lovely review and encouraging words. I was a little unsure if this would meet requirements so you have helped reassure me . I will make the correction so appreciate your eyes. With Cheers