No money.
A songlyric.28 total reviews
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
We all need to be careful because it could be us at any time. I try to help people when I can but in this world you can never be sure if they actually need the money or food or if they are just playing you.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2015
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We all need to be careful because it could be us at any time. I try to help people when I can but in this world you can never be sure if they actually need the money or food or if they are just playing you.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from misscookie
The photo you choose for your poem
is a perfect match.
It's sad but your words are so true. Money has taken control of the humans morals and heart.
Cookie
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2015
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The photo you choose for your poem
is a perfect match.
It's sad but your words are so true. Money has taken control of the humans morals and heart.
Cookie
Comment Written 18-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
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You're very welcome.
Cookie
Comment from Joan E.
I admired the timely social commentary in your song lyrics. They seem to tell the story of the man on the bench in the photograph selected. I hope you set your poem to music. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2015
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I admired the timely social commentary in your song lyrics. They seem to tell the story of the man on the bench in the photograph selected. I hope you set your poem to music. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 17-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from judiverse
This is, unfortunately, the case. When you become down on your luck, your friends desert you. Maybe they were never your real friends in the first place. Great description of the homeless man. In the U.S., some of the homeless have served in the armed forces and have had trouble adjusting to life. Psychiatric problems, drug and alcohol addiction lead them to this life on the streets. There are shelters, but often they are full to capacity. Great observations in this. judi
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2015
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This is, unfortunately, the case. When you become down on your luck, your friends desert you. Maybe they were never your real friends in the first place. Great description of the homeless man. In the U.S., some of the homeless have served in the armed forces and have had trouble adjusting to life. Psychiatric problems, drug and alcohol addiction lead them to this life on the streets. There are shelters, but often they are full to capacity. Great observations in this. judi
Comment Written 17-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.
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You're welcome. Take care. judi
Comment from pharp
Your poems rings the truth. When you have money you attract all types of people who say and want to me your friend. But when the money is all gone so are you so-called friends. Be careful who you choose and call a friend. Thanks for sharing ...............................Portia
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2015
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Your poems rings the truth. When you have money you attract all types of people who say and want to me your friend. But when the money is all gone so are you so-called friends. Be careful who you choose and call a friend. Thanks for sharing ...............................Portia
Comment Written 17-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Ine, great work mate. You are right when you say sad but true. Most people wander through their lives never ever noticing that there are lots of less fortunate people out there, I certainly know it. Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2015
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G'day Ine, great work mate. You are right when you say sad but true. Most people wander through their lives never ever noticing that there are lots of less fortunate people out there, I certainly know it. Cheers Fez
Comment Written 17-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from Ronni
A sad but true irony and cruel tragedy of too many. Money attracts all
kinds of instant and fickle 'friends'. When it is gone, and nothing in it
for them, they abandon so easily, with no conscience about it. Such
a heartbreak to see so much loneliness and homelessness all over the
world. Very gripping picture indeed. Thanks for sharing.
Blessings, Ronni
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2015
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A sad but true irony and cruel tragedy of too many. Money attracts all
kinds of instant and fickle 'friends'. When it is gone, and nothing in it
for them, they abandon so easily, with no conscience about it. Such
a heartbreak to see so much loneliness and homelessness all over the
world. Very gripping picture indeed. Thanks for sharing.
Blessings, Ronni
Comment Written 16-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from harleyangelbrat
Your poem is very expressive and descriptive which makes for an interesting read. It touched my heart and reminded me of all the rough times, but most of all it reminded me of when my six kids and I were homeless. It was a scary and desperate time, but God lead us out of it and brought us back to our home. (long story) I really enjoyed reading this very much. God bless you!
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2015
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Your poem is very expressive and descriptive which makes for an interesting read. It touched my heart and reminded me of all the rough times, but most of all it reminded me of when my six kids and I were homeless. It was a scary and desperate time, but God lead us out of it and brought us back to our home. (long story) I really enjoyed reading this very much. God bless you!
Comment Written 16-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a nice and blessed Sunday.
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You're very welcome. I hope you have a blessed day! Marilyn
Comment from gamay
Hi Ine, I love this poem and yes it's true. Money can run our life. So while you have it just careful to choose a friend and careful to used it. Thanks for sharing, gamay
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2015
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Hi Ine, I love this poem and yes it's true. Money can run our life. So while you have it just careful to choose a friend and careful to used it. Thanks for sharing, gamay
Comment Written 16-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed Sunday.
Comment from Curly Girly
Your disturbing poem is true. Life is cruel, or perhaps people make it so. The biblical parable of the prodigal son illustrates this truth well. Your poem serves as a reminder.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2015
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Your disturbing poem is true. Life is cruel, or perhaps people make it so. The biblical parable of the prodigal son illustrates this truth well. Your poem serves as a reminder.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed Sunday.
