Comment from l.raven

Excellent

I love this poem...because that is what true love is all about...I would die for you...so very nicely written....and I love your picture...

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Comment from poetadeu

Excellent

Well gosh, was it that bad? This is powerful
imagery at it's best. Your senryu deals with
the rawest of human emotion. Love is a basic
need and one of the most hurtful when misused.
Great contest entry...

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2015

Comment from seaglass

Excellent

There have been a number of sad and heroic stories on the new during the last few years. In these stories individuals willingly took a bullet to save a mate, a friend, or a child. This is true love in the highest degree.

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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

True Love synrue,

I like your senryu, good job with the syllable count. The emotion you capture is love and sacrifice, mostly love. Good choice. I wish you good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2015

Comment from nordicgirl

Exceptional

This is taking it to the extreme. However it is spot on. That is the instinct of love, we see it all the rime. Perfectly put.

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Comment from Benjamin Valencia

Good

Hmm. interesting image both the picture and your words. You're brave, but I'm having trouble imagining the sound first and then the leap. Bullets are pretty quick. Good luck and cheers.

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Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

I'd say taking a bullet for someone is a pretty strong indication that you love them. Oh, the ultimate sacrifices that some will make for amore.

Better them than me. ;)

Good luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2015

Comment from robina1978

Excellent

Nice photo of a red rose that complements your poem perfectly. It is a true Senryu. Gun's loud, make you want to jump to the front, true love.
Worthy entry for the prompt Best wishes for it.

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Comment from ellie6

Excellent

A nice illustration depicts a brave thought. Metre and syllable count are all there. A well thought out little piece. worthy of a vote.

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Comment from Tessa Kay

Excellent

You say so much in just a few words. A moment in time full of drama and suspense. and I like how you have designed the colours to match with the rose. Very effective.
I liked it a lot. :)

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2015