Comment from Benjamin Valencia

Excellent

Hello. Wish this were true. Good write and effective words penned to capture the reality of the image and the reality of what should be true. Good luck and cheers.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2015

Thank you

Comment from Nosha17

Excellent

I guess, these politicians have all the tricks up their sleeves. I love the parrot, his message is clear. In line 3, I think you meant lip-syncing. Good luck in the contest. Faye

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2015

Wow that was a big boo-boo. Thanks for catching it.

Comment from The Cowboy Poet

Excellent

I love your play on words in the last line. Very humorous. The form is correct and the pun is hilarious. Well done. Cowboy.

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2015

Thanks for reviewing.