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I Choose Rainbows

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Thoughts from the dark side

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Comment from Pyrrho
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I guess this is the ultimate in blank verse ... It may be original with you in that you came up with the idea, but I am afraid you have been anticipated by others. I've seen this twice on Fan Story already.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2016


reply by the author on 28-Jan-2016
    You should read my poem, Eternity.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
    Don't know what you are talking about.
Comment from tfawcus
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Death be cruel indeed! All I have here to go on is a blank screen with just the one word, 'I' in the top left hand corner. Was the poet scooped up in the arms of Death before he - or she - managed to get any further?

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2016