Family
An Acrostic Poem5 total reviews
Comment from harleyangelbrat
This is deserves recognition! It is written well and has a beautiful flow. You have expressed family so wonderfully and lovingly. Your poem really touched my heart. I really enjoyed reading this very much. It is inspirational. God bless you!!
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2015
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This is deserves recognition! It is written well and has a beautiful flow. You have expressed family so wonderfully and lovingly. Your poem really touched my heart. I really enjoyed reading this very much. It is inspirational. God bless you!!
Comment Written 13-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2015
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Wow! Thank you so much! I'm sorry I'm so late with a reply but I don't get a chance to get on Fan Story as much as I'd like. I'm so glad you liked it and I appreciate your sweet review!
Comment from Unspoken94
Why did you stop? This poem feels like it's just getting off the ground. You have captured a special understanding of family with quality verse. I hope you will expand this poem and add a half dozen more stanzas. Nice going.
Bill Stephenson
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2015
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Why did you stop? This poem feels like it's just getting off the ground. You have captured a special understanding of family with quality verse. I hope you will expand this poem and add a half dozen more stanzas. Nice going.
Bill Stephenson
Comment Written 10-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2015
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Thank you so much! I would've expanded but it was an Acrostic poem and I had already spelled Family downwards. Guess I should've used a longer title. LOL Thank you again!
Comment from Clockwise
The rhythm and rhyme of this poem works well. The difficulty in achieving this in an acrostic, I know well. Very nicely done!! One suggestion may be to introduce another idea besides memories, which you seem to address in 2 of the 6 lines.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2015
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The rhythm and rhyme of this poem works well. The difficulty in achieving this in an acrostic, I know well. Very nicely done!! One suggestion may be to introduce another idea besides memories, which you seem to address in 2 of the 6 lines.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2015
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Thank you so much! I appreciate your suggestion as well. Thanks again!
Comment from Jackreese
I couldn't agree more with this poem! I am currently dealing with my father who is in the hospital waiting for a liver transplant. I love my family so much and pray that he gets what he needs. This poem fit so well with what I have been feeling. Great job!
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2015
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I couldn't agree more with this poem! I am currently dealing with my father who is in the hospital waiting for a liver transplant. I love my family so much and pray that he gets what he needs. This poem fit so well with what I have been feeling. Great job!
Comment Written 10-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2015
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Oh, bless your heart. I will definitely keep your father in prayer. Thank you so much for your sweet review
Comment from Domino 2
You can't beat loving family get-togethers, as you so well express here.
Family are so special, particularly if they're loving and supportive.
Best wishes, Ray
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2015
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You can't beat loving family get-togethers, as you so well express here.
Family are so special, particularly if they're loving and supportive.
Best wishes, Ray
Comment Written 10-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2015
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Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it!