What Lies Within
An Essence poem about true beauty5 total reviews
Comment from Pen of Fire
Love this poem. So much said in just a few words. You did a great job with this entry. It makes one think. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2015
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Love this poem. So much said in just a few words. You did a great job with this entry. It makes one think. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2015
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Thank you so much for stopping by to review. It was my first effort for any of the short poems, so I wasn't too disappointed at where I landed in the votes. Gotta learn domehow, right?
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements splendidly with a correct line and syllable count. You deliver an inspiring piece of spiritual verse with your well chosen words. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2015
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This meets the contest requirements splendidly with a correct line and syllable count. You deliver an inspiring piece of spiritual verse with your well chosen words. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2015
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Thank you so much, Mystic Angel, you are awesome! I've never tried this form before, but I wanted to express much in few words. Appreciate you!
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Great job - you captured my vote.
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Thank you so much!!!
Comment from jules4jesus
oh yes amen amen amen awesome thats captures all that is in my heart today so simple and yet so strong fantastic love the art work too
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2015
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oh yes amen amen amen awesome thats captures all that is in my heart today so simple and yet so strong fantastic love the art work too
Comment Written 09-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2015
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Thank you so much for the brilliant 6 star review. What a wonderful response to a poem about God's love and desire to be allowed in!
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i have experienced Gods healing and its great and i want to go deeper into his awesome love
Comment from Mary H-W
A big message for such few words. I agree completely, God loves and desires us from within. your piece reads well and concisely. And such an unusual picture to go with it.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2015
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A big message for such few words. I agree completely, God loves and desires us from within. your piece reads well and concisely. And such an unusual picture to go with it.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2015
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Thank you, Mary, what a sweet review. Much thanks!
Comment from sibhus
What wonderful thoughts in these few words. If only we could let go of our selfish control and be open to his cries. Cries that we miss everyday due the chaos that we create for ourselves. A great poem that makes for an excellent entry for the contest, and good luck.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
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What wonderful thoughts in these few words. If only we could let go of our selfish control and be open to his cries. Cries that we miss everyday due the chaos that we create for ourselves. A great poem that makes for an excellent entry for the contest, and good luck.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
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Thank you so much for the sweet review. It was an experiment for me to use this form, and you are right, it is hard to let go of selfish control!