I Choose Rainbows
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Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
Ahhhhhh yes... that would be a nightmare.
A buzzard, nasty varmint that he is .. trying to steal the last dream of your life.
Well done, visual in content and easy to read.
:-) Carolyn
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2015
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Ahhhhhh yes... that would be a nightmare.
A buzzard, nasty varmint that he is .. trying to steal the last dream of your life.
Well done, visual in content and easy to read.
:-) Carolyn
Comment Written 06-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2015
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Thanks
Comment from poetadeu
They are one creature that to me is
really frightening. I found myself a
few feet from one a couple weeks
ago. He had turned his head to look
at me before I saw him there. His
eyes appeared to be warning me not
to step any closer. He was one ugly
vulture. I slowly turned to walk back
the way I came. He finished his meal,
yuck, before he spread his huge wings
for take off. Well, I am on your side...
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2015
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They are one creature that to me is
really frightening. I found myself a
few feet from one a couple weeks
ago. He had turned his head to look
at me before I saw him there. His
eyes appeared to be warning me not
to step any closer. He was one ugly
vulture. I slowly turned to walk back
the way I came. He finished his meal,
yuck, before he spread his huge wings
for take off. Well, I am on your side...
Comment Written 06-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2015
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You tell a nice story.
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Thanks and I enjoyed reading you as well. ::}}Joyce
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Thanks and I enjoyed reading you as well. ::}}Joyce
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Comment from D.M. De Alwis
Arcing frantically - is the only line that does not jive with the rest of the poem. Unless of course you, the subject of the poem was running away or the buzzard was particularly hungry.
That said, I can see the images in this poem and the buzzard descending. The words are put together in just the right way to create that crescendo at the end. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2015
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Arcing frantically - is the only line that does not jive with the rest of the poem. Unless of course you, the subject of the poem was running away or the buzzard was particularly hungry.
That said, I can see the images in this poem and the buzzard descending. The words are put together in just the right way to create that crescendo at the end. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 06-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2015
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The buzzard could'nt wait to eat my remains.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought the poem was well written. I love the imagery - I could picture this all in my head. I'm not sure about that last line - sorry, I think it went over my head. I get the feeling that is an important one but just didn't pull it all together for me. Great job though with the poem. Well written.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2015
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I thought the poem was well written. I love the imagery - I could picture this all in my head. I'm not sure about that last line - sorry, I think it went over my head. I get the feeling that is an important one but just didn't pull it all together for me. Great job though with the poem. Well written.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2015
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It was a dream of death. His last dream.
