Beautiful Death
Viewing comments for Chapter 10031 "when a child dies"from birth I have longed for death
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Comment from Brett Matthew West
All emotions that those who have lost a child certainly experience. Not much worse a painful thing to have to endure. Well written poem depicts this theme nicely.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2015
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All emotions that those who have lost a child certainly experience. Not much worse a painful thing to have to endure. Well written poem depicts this theme nicely.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2015
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Thank you.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend,
I am so happy to hear from you. I like your poem about children and how adults should teach them and show them the way. Good job!
I found a few space errors, no biggy -
our precieved protection= perceived
belief issomething= belief is something
forgivness = forgiveness
ourheatseats = ? I am not sure what this word is
beforethere = before there
ithave= it have
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2015
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Hello my friend,
I am so happy to hear from you. I like your poem about children and how adults should teach them and show them the way. Good job!
I found a few space errors, no biggy -
our precieved protection= perceived
belief issomething= belief is something
forgivness = forgiveness
ourheatseats = ? I am not sure what this word is
beforethere = before there
ithave= it have
Comment Written 05-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2015
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Thank you for your always kind help.