Tiny Tales of Terror
Viewing comments for Chapter 56 "The Sky is Falling"Multi-authored book of flash/micro horror fiction
13 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I can't imagine you being evil. I am sure Dean will like this post. I can't imagine he wouldn't. Oh my!!! You did a good job telling an entire story in such a few words. It takes me 80,000. LOL
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2015
I can't imagine you being evil. I am sure Dean will like this post. I can't imagine he wouldn't. Oh my!!! You did a good job telling an entire story in such a few words. It takes me 80,000. LOL
Comment Written 01-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2015
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Thank you, my friend~Debbie
Comment from tfawcus
Revenge is sweet - and particularly so when one possesses the occult powers to make it so devastatingly effective! I've known some little monsters in my time, but none to match this one!
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2015
Revenge is sweet - and particularly so when one possesses the occult powers to make it so devastatingly effective! I've known some little monsters in my time, but none to match this one!
Comment Written 01-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2015
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Thank you, my friend~Debbie
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
She was an evil child! Her parents were right. What a brilliant horror story. Well done, Debbie, I am sure
Dean will approve! :) xsx Sandra
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2015
She was an evil child! Her parents were right. What a brilliant horror story. Well done, Debbie, I am sure
Dean will approve! :) xsx Sandra
Comment Written 01-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2015
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Thank you, my friend~Debbie
Comment from Dean Kuch
Geesh. Talk about sibling rivalry, Sally seemed to take it pretty seriously, perhaps even to the extreme. Hers would be a tough act to follow, I imagine. I heard her performance nearly brought the house down, heh-heh.
I will say this for little Sally. Carrie has nothing on her when it comes to telekinetic powers. Too bad Stephen King killed Carrie off in his novel. It would'a made for one helluva showdown.
N-i-c-c-c-c-c-c-ccccccccce, Debbie. Yet another great contribution to our book.
Thank you!
~Dean :}
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2015
Geesh. Talk about sibling rivalry, Sally seemed to take it pretty seriously, perhaps even to the extreme. Hers would be a tough act to follow, I imagine. I heard her performance nearly brought the house down, heh-heh.
I will say this for little Sally. Carrie has nothing on her when it comes to telekinetic powers. Too bad Stephen King killed Carrie off in his novel. It would'a made for one helluva showdown.
N-i-c-c-c-c-c-c-ccccccccce, Debbie. Yet another great contribution to our book.
Thank you!
~Dean :}
Comment Written 31-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2015
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Funny, My friend. I'm glad you like it. My family does truly think I am evil, always have been, always will be in their eyes~Debbie
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You're very welcome, Debbie.
~Dean :}
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Wow! Grrrreat horror story, and so clever. Debbie, you surprise me. You always write such pleasant things, and now this! LOL! Good way to let out frustrations, I suppose. Well done! :)
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2015
Wow! Grrrreat horror story, and so clever. Debbie, you surprise me. You always write such pleasant things, and now this! LOL! Good way to let out frustrations, I suppose. Well done! :)
Comment Written 31-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2015
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Funny, My friend. I'm glad you like it. My family does truly think I am evil, always have been, always will be in their eyes~Debbie
Comment from Jay Squires
Debbie is exposing a different part of her creative mind, Dontcha think,Dean? And doing a devil of a good job of it. Let me know if I should do anything about it. Maybe let Tom know. There's only supposed to be one master of horror around here.
You're gonna take care of Debbie? Hmmmmm, wonder what you have in mind.
No, don't worry about me, Dean. I'll go back to my doggie stories now. See ya, friend.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2015
Debbie is exposing a different part of her creative mind, Dontcha think,Dean? And doing a devil of a good job of it. Let me know if I should do anything about it. Maybe let Tom know. There's only supposed to be one master of horror around here.
You're gonna take care of Debbie? Hmmmmm, wonder what you have in mind.
No, don't worry about me, Dean. I'll go back to my doggie stories now. See ya, friend.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2015
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Funny, My friend. I'm glad you like it. My family does truly think I am evil, always have been, always will be in their eyes~Debbie
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Debbie! LOL you were a little demon, weren't you? LOL
I like~The Sky is Falling~ it is scary and suspensful. I didn't like the end, poor little sister. I think Dean will like it.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2015
Debbie! LOL you were a little demon, weren't you? LOL
I like~The Sky is Falling~ it is scary and suspensful. I didn't like the end, poor little sister. I think Dean will like it.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2015
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Thank you, my friend~Debbie
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Debbie...
_ Great story. (*>*)
_ LOL...YOu can't beat that 'sisterly love.'
_ A sibling has to do what a sibling has to do!
_ I'm sure Dean will enjoy it.
>>> Delete extra space between and/her.
>>> Comma after sister, or it reads like sister(nun) Tammy.
_ Sally was five and [] her sister(,) Tammy was four.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*.*)
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2015
Hi, Debbie...
_ Great story. (*>*)
_ LOL...YOu can't beat that 'sisterly love.'
_ A sibling has to do what a sibling has to do!
_ I'm sure Dean will enjoy it.
>>> Delete extra space between and/her.
>>> Comma after sister, or it reads like sister(nun) Tammy.
_ Sally was five and [] her sister(,) Tammy was four.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*.*)
Comment Written 31-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2015
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Thanks for catching my spags. I changed them. I'm glad you like it. My family does truly think I am evil, always have been, always will be in their eyes~Debbie
Comment from barkingdog
It looks like the parents were right. Sally(the one in the story--not you. hee-hee) had an evil power. I can't imagine what she might do to them when they are no longer of any use to her.
Good one, Debbie.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2015
It looks like the parents were right. Sally(the one in the story--not you. hee-hee) had an evil power. I can't imagine what she might do to them when they are no longer of any use to her.
Good one, Debbie.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2015
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Thank you, my friend. My family always has and always will consider me evil~Debbie
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
Ah, there is nothing like sisterly love. That mystical bond that makes them care and look out for one another...
Not so here it would seem.
Enjoyed this one, Sally is one evil little thing isn't she?
Great stuff.
GMG
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2015
Hi there,
Ah, there is nothing like sisterly love. That mystical bond that makes them care and look out for one another...
Not so here it would seem.
Enjoyed this one, Sally is one evil little thing isn't she?
Great stuff.
GMG
Comment Written 31-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2015
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Thank you, my friend~Debbie