Conscience-Man's soul mate
2-10-2 poem9 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
Digging in the attic again, and I found a poem I'd missed. I've never tried this difficult, concise form, but you managed to communicate volumes. I liked the "soulmate" analogy plus the play on "conscience" and "conscious" also. Thanks for the apt illustration too. Well done! -Joan
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2017
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Digging in the attic again, and I found a poem I'd missed. I've never tried this difficult, concise form, but you managed to communicate volumes. I liked the "soulmate" analogy plus the play on "conscience" and "conscious" also. Thanks for the apt illustration too. Well done! -Joan
Comment Written 04-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2017
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Joan my friend, I appreciate your visit and the encouraging review, thank you very much.
Comment from Pen of Fire
How clever is that! I love everything about this entry. The picture is perfect and your entry speaks so much truth. A real winner.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2015
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How clever is that! I love everything about this entry. The picture is perfect and your entry speaks so much truth. A real winner.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2015
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Hello friend, I am highly encouraged by your wonderful review, appreciate your time and the stars, thank you very much.
Comment from Caressa_08
Yes, so true...Sometimes we just let that pounding thought that we have, our conscience ..not taken into consideration, & we might commit a sin or cause so many troubles in our life because of not listening to it...Good job here.. with this one & Love the picture, & too, soul-mate, a description for our conscience...Wish I had a six left.
Caressa_08
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2015
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Yes, so true...Sometimes we just let that pounding thought that we have, our conscience ..not taken into consideration, & we might commit a sin or cause so many troubles in our life because of not listening to it...Good job here.. with this one & Love the picture, & too, soul-mate, a description for our conscience...Wish I had a six left.
Caressa_08
Comment Written 30-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2015
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Hello Caressa, I am pleased to read your wonderful review and insights, appreciate your visit and the stars, thank you my friend.
Comment from Bill Schott
This two-ten-two, Conscience, Man's Soulmate, has the proscribed syllable count and reminds us that we should listen to our voice of reason. Nice use of the classic example.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2015
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This two-ten-two, Conscience, Man's Soulmate, has the proscribed syllable count and reminds us that we should listen to our voice of reason. Nice use of the classic example.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2015
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Hello Bill, I appreciate your visit and the insights, thank you very much sir.
Comment from angel123
Excellent presentation of your poem. I love your artwork choice and you witty poem. It flows well with humor and your message is funny. Well written!
Angel123
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2015
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Excellent presentation of your poem. I love your artwork choice and you witty poem. It flows well with humor and your message is funny. Well written!
Angel123
Comment Written 30-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2015
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Hello Angel, I appreciate your visit and the wonderful review, glad you like the write, thank you very much.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello mystery writer,
~Conscience-Man's soul mate~is an interesting 2/10/2 poem about our concience and how it keeps us away from evil forces. Good job with the syllable count.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2015
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Hello mystery writer,
~Conscience-Man's soul mate~is an interesting 2/10/2 poem about our concience and how it keeps us away from evil forces. Good job with the syllable count.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2015
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Hello friend, I thank you for your time and the wonderful review, pleased you like the write, thank you.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements splendidly with a spot on line and syllable count. This is a very clever life lesson beautifully executed in a few well chosen words. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2015
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This meets the contest requirements splendidly with a spot on line and syllable count. This is a very clever life lesson beautifully executed in a few well chosen words. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2015
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Hello Mystic Angel 7777, I appreciate your time and thank you for your visit and the wonderful review.
Comment from ellie6
Well said. our conscience is all that keeps us from anarchy. It is more well developed in some people than in others. Well observed.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2015
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Well said. our conscience is all that keeps us from anarchy. It is more well developed in some people than in others. Well observed.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2015
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Hi ellie6, appreciate your visit and the insights, thank you very much.
Comment from Jackarrie
This is a very good philosophical entry into the 2-10-2 with just the right amount of syllables. The message in the image is good too.
Good luck in the contest.
Mary
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2015
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This is a very good philosophical entry into the 2-10-2 with just the right amount of syllables. The message in the image is good too.
Good luck in the contest.
Mary
Comment Written 30-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2015
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Hello Mary, I appreciate your visit and am glad that you like the write, thank you very much.