To The End Of Love
Dance me till the end of love24 total reviews
Comment from luchi31
Wow! I like the way the thoughts and the emotions delivered. Now, I feel like I'm gonna work hard before I can create such and excellent masterpiece.
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Wow! I like the way the thoughts and the emotions delivered. Now, I feel like I'm gonna work hard before I can create such and excellent masterpiece.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2016
Comment from poetadeu
Although the sadness is evident there is a ray of
bright light which has lead you to a destiny of
your own. Listening to others,digesting their
pains, regrets, loves, life's realities, to pursue
creative writing. Now, how cool is that? I find
this interesting and the art is hardly noticeable
just a glimpse. Thank you.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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Although the sadness is evident there is a ray of
bright light which has lead you to a destiny of
your own. Listening to others,digesting their
pains, regrets, loves, life's realities, to pursue
creative writing. Now, how cool is that? I find
this interesting and the art is hardly noticeable
just a glimpse. Thank you.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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Thank you so very much poetadeu for that insightful review..Been off line for a while reason for the delay in reponding
TK
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A pleasure! ::}}LOL
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A pleasure! ::}}LOL
Comment from justafan
Lovely again Sir Knight. You are just something very special in the way you express yourself :). I feel blessed to have met you so soon after joining FanStory. Keep writing and I will surely be here reading sug.
Always,
Missy
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Lovely again Sir Knight. You are just something very special in the way you express yourself :). I feel blessed to have met you so soon after joining FanStory. Keep writing and I will surely be here reading sug.
Always,
Missy
Comment Written 31-Jul-2015
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Our inspiration comes from all walks of life and all sorts of situations. I know my writing helps my heart heal from the loss of loved ones or rejoice in things that make me happy. Well done TK."What once was no longer is." :<) Nancy
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Our inspiration comes from all walks of life and all sorts of situations. I know my writing helps my heart heal from the loss of loved ones or rejoice in things that make me happy. Well done TK."What once was no longer is." :<) Nancy
Comment Written 31-Jul-2015
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello A TARNISHED KNIGHT,
~~To The End Of Love~~ I can't say this is a poem, is more of a piece of your mind. Your thoughts about what your muse is about. Good job!
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Hello A TARNISHED KNIGHT,
~~To The End Of Love~~ I can't say this is a poem, is more of a piece of your mind. Your thoughts about what your muse is about. Good job!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2015
Comment from Pantygynt
An excellent prose poem on the subject of love, and its ending. Some lovely metaphors in here,m the cedar chest of our minds and the more complex metaphor of the key that follows it.
Please pardon me for pointing this out but I think you are missian "of" in the sentence, "Truth has a way [of] surfacing..."
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An excellent prose poem on the subject of love, and its ending. Some lovely metaphors in here,m the cedar chest of our minds and the more complex metaphor of the key that follows it.
Please pardon me for pointing this out but I think you are missian "of" in the sentence, "Truth has a way [of] surfacing..."
Comment Written 30-Jul-2015
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day TK. This is indeed a different write for you sir. It is hard to say where inspiration comes from, but mine is simply from life and that is all I write really. Well done mate. Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2015
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G'day TK. This is indeed a different write for you sir. It is hard to say where inspiration comes from, but mine is simply from life and that is all I write really. Well done mate. Cheers Fez
Comment Written 30-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2015
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Thanks my Feral friend...Was not one of my better ones that's for sure....It should really not have been even posted lol...That's what happens after you spent 2 hrs in the dentist chair and he gives you a prescription for pain pills... Which BTW I was glad he did..Then you take 3 fingers of Jack Daniels to wash them down with....Sit at the computer and write what you think is the beginning of the next great American novel lol
TK
Comment from Treischel
A soulful free verse narrative verse poem about life's journey through that minefield of love. Your endearing point is that it becomes better shared by two. Nicely said.
I'm not crazy about block narrative poems. They look too much like prose. You could dress it up just a bit by using that one finger tool known as the Return key as a sculptor's chisel. Here's what I mean, ill use your first 7 lines and not change a word:
Sometimes people ask me
where
or how
do I get the inspiration of the things
I write..
I say,
like many a writer,
I don't really
have an answer for that.
It may have been
an old man sitting alone in a rocking chair
on a porch
on a sweltering hot southern night
thinking
about his wife
who has passed.
It may have been
a loving kiss
between two lovers
on a beach .
perhaps
a child crying over a lost pet.
But
I can say the one thing
that has inspired me most
is
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2015
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A soulful free verse narrative verse poem about life's journey through that minefield of love. Your endearing point is that it becomes better shared by two. Nicely said.
I'm not crazy about block narrative poems. They look too much like prose. You could dress it up just a bit by using that one finger tool known as the Return key as a sculptor's chisel. Here's what I mean, ill use your first 7 lines and not change a word:
Sometimes people ask me
where
or how
do I get the inspiration of the things
I write..
I say,
like many a writer,
I don't really
have an answer for that.
It may have been
an old man sitting alone in a rocking chair
on a porch
on a sweltering hot southern night
thinking
about his wife
who has passed.
It may have been
a loving kiss
between two lovers
on a beach .
perhaps
a child crying over a lost pet.
But
I can say the one thing
that has inspired me most
is
Comment Written 30-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2015
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You are so right Mr. T. Was not one of my better ones that's for sure....It should really not have been even posted lol...That's what happens after you spent 2 hrs in the dentist chair and he gives you a prescription for pain pills... Which BTW I was glad he did..Then you take 3 fingers of Jack Daniels to wash them down with....Sit at the computer and write what you think is the beginning of the next great American novel lol
TK
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
My Mama said the best way to know a person is through their thoughts and if they are not accessable, then their scribbles are the next best.
she is right in this case.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2015
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My Mama said the best way to know a person is through their thoughts and if they are not accessable, then their scribbles are the next best.
she is right in this case.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2015
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Thank you much Lady Barb Was not one of my better ones that's for sure....It should really not have been even posted lol...That's what happens after you spent 2 hrs in the dentist chair and he gives you a prescription for pain pills... Which BTW I was glad he did..Then you take 3 fingers of Jack Daniels to wash them down with....Sit at the computer and write what you think is the beginning of the next great American novel lol
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Is that your secret to success?
Comment from pharp
Hello TK,
This is a bit different than what you usually penned. But when you write from your heart and depending on what is going on in one's life things can be different. I pray all is well with you and can definitely relate to writing from the heart. I truly understand your message, I never wrote a poem, nor did I ever read any except for the ones my sister penned. She was the poet and a very good one indeed. After she passed in 2010, I have been writing and unable to put the pen down. When I write it is inspired by God and I will challenge myself my entering a contest. Thanks for sharing my friend. Blessings and lol Portia
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2015
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Hello TK,
This is a bit different than what you usually penned. But when you write from your heart and depending on what is going on in one's life things can be different. I pray all is well with you and can definitely relate to writing from the heart. I truly understand your message, I never wrote a poem, nor did I ever read any except for the ones my sister penned. She was the poet and a very good one indeed. After she passed in 2010, I have been writing and unable to put the pen down. When I write it is inspired by God and I will challenge myself my entering a contest. Thanks for sharing my friend. Blessings and lol Portia
Comment Written 29-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2015
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Thank you so very much Lady P. Was not one of my better ones that's for sure....It should really not have been even posted lol...That's what happens after you spent 2 hrs in the dentist chair and he gives you a prescription for pain pills... Which BTW I was glad he did..Then you take 3 fingers of Jack Daniels to wash them down with....Sit at the computer and write what you think is the beginning of the next great American novel lol