Comment from ellie6

Excellent

Music can have a calming effect, but it can also tip over into melancholy, which seems to have happened in this poem, not a feelgood poem, but somewhat deeper.

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2015

Thanks for the review.

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Sholessjo...

_ Spot on, 'sounds of despair.'
_ This is well though out and composed.
_ I can feel the blackness of the night, discourse, and the sadness of the symphony.
_ Suggestion only: You might want to consider artwork and complementary formatting to further impact your 'great' writing.
_ Beautifully composed.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2015

Thanks for the revue. I write primarily for myself and have stopped using pictures. I do not promote.

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