I Choose Rainbows
Viewing comments for Chapter 110 "My Solitude"Thoughts from the dark side
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Comment from Cybertron1986
What a powerful piece. I skipped numerous other works before coming to yours, and your piece couldn't be ignored. Your descriptive language, structure and pace of this poem made it all to wonderful and engaging. I liked the words, "hollow" and "anchor" which gave it much more deeper meaning with a sorta twist that triggered the right emotion. Thank you for sharing. Much enjoyable as well as philosophical.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2015
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What a powerful piece. I skipped numerous other works before coming to yours, and your piece couldn't be ignored. Your descriptive language, structure and pace of this poem made it all to wonderful and engaging. I liked the words, "hollow" and "anchor" which gave it much more deeper meaning with a sorta twist that triggered the right emotion. Thank you for sharing. Much enjoyable as well as philosophical.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2015
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thanks
Comment from nancyrabbrose
You have written a lovely, haunting poem. It appears to have more than one interpretation, which is good.
I cannot think of any corrections to suggest.
There is one thing, however. At first reading I thought the poem would be about how much you enjoy you alone time, but perhaps not. You are missing someone who has meant very much to you.
The title is what threw me off at first.
But, it is a sweet poem.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2015
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You have written a lovely, haunting poem. It appears to have more than one interpretation, which is good.
I cannot think of any corrections to suggest.
There is one thing, however. At first reading I thought the poem would be about how much you enjoy you alone time, but perhaps not. You are missing someone who has meant very much to you.
The title is what threw me off at first.
But, it is a sweet poem.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2015
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thanks
Comment from Serendipity!
You kept me hole (whole?)
I love your thoughts and the way the lines smoothly flow into each other. Is there a reason you did not have each verse the exact same amount of lines? It sounds like you are missing someone that was very special and dear to you. That is sad. I hope you can be re-united and blend together once more.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2015
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You kept me hole (whole?)
I love your thoughts and the way the lines smoothly flow into each other. Is there a reason you did not have each verse the exact same amount of lines? It sounds like you are missing someone that was very special and dear to you. That is sad. I hope you can be re-united and blend together once more.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2015
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HI; why do you think each verse needs to haqve the same amount of lines? That is interesting. And thanks for the spelling mistake.
Thanks,
Norm
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Why?? Maybe because I am 60??? Who knows :)
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Why?? Maybe because I am 60??? Who knows :)
Comment from MSJVClarke
The was a well-written poem with a soft tone and it certainly expressed your reason to name it solitude. Your stanzas flowed smoothly and each told a part of the things you held precious and the end reiterated your reason for your solitude and served your title well.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2015
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The was a well-written poem with a soft tone and it certainly expressed your reason to name it solitude. Your stanzas flowed smoothly and each told a part of the things you held precious and the end reiterated your reason for your solitude and served your title well.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2015
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Thanks
