Comment from poetadeu

Excellent

Yes, depression can and will destroy every bit of good
in one's memory...A simple smile from a child is an
amazing healer. The innocent beauty in the eyes of
a child has a touch of magic that is rare. A sharp
reminder of which way we want to go. Nice read,
well written.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2015

Thanks for the kind review. You are an excellent writer. Your work is beautiful.

It is hard to write when you are depressed. The thoughts stay in your mind and words do not appear.

reply by poetadeu on 11-Aug-2015

A great pleasure...thank you!
LOL::}}Joyce

reply by Anonymous Member on 14-Aug-2015

A great pleasure...thank you!
LOL::}}Joyce

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi,Sholessjo...

_ Having suffered from depression, I can appreciate your message in this well written poem.
_ I like how it ends on a positive note, giving glory where glory is due.

_ Missing hyphen: self-pity

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2015

I hope you got over your depression.