Teasing You So Tenderly
Some loving by the fireplace30 total reviews
Comment from lakeport
Teasing you so tenderly, indeed that' s very lovely expressed poem with an romantic touch. I enjoyed reading it, God bless you. Lakeport.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2015
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Teasing you so tenderly, indeed that' s very lovely expressed poem with an romantic touch. I enjoyed reading it, God bless you. Lakeport.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2015
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Thank yo so very much Lakeport
tkl
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you are very welcome,Lakeport,
Comment from country ranch writer
tender moments even for you my dear knight wow so sweet and kind you can be must be the storm and the firelight mellowing you hehe
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2015
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tender moments even for you my dear knight wow so sweet and kind you can be must be the storm and the firelight mellowing you hehe
Comment Written 23-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2015
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Yes my dear CRW I am like that 60's song by Donavon They Call Me Mellow Yellow hehehe Thank so much I always enjoy your reviews..And yes I can be sweet and kind I even have references Well a few anyway lol
tk
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he he softie
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Please don't tell anyone that I am a softy It will runin my reputation hehe
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YOU SECRET IS SAFE WITH ME HUGS AND SMILES GO OUT YOUR WAY
Comment from Treischel
Oh yeah, those are very pleasant images of a lovely place to be, doing what comes natural, long and slow, sweet and tenderly. A fabulous romantic touch in abcb rhymed quatrains. Definitely a night to savor.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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Oh yeah, those are very pleasant images of a lovely place to be, doing what comes natural, long and slow, sweet and tenderly. A fabulous romantic touch in abcb rhymed quatrains. Definitely a night to savor.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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Ah thank you so much Mr T Yes a Knight to savor it was lol
TK
Comment from Chrissy710
Nicely composed TK an easy to read poem with a good meter and rhyming that seemed to flow evenly and showed your skill with words. The image was complementary to your theme also. Lovely Cheers Christine
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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Nicely composed TK an easy to read poem with a good meter and rhyming that seemed to flow evenly and showed your skill with words. The image was complementary to your theme also. Lovely Cheers Christine
Comment Written 23-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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Thank you very much Lady Christine !!!!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Teasing You So Tenderly
Nice job- TARNISHED KNIGHT! I like your romantic poem about loving slow and tender. Good job. I like the art work too.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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Teasing You So Tenderly
Nice job- TARNISHED KNIGHT! I like your romantic poem about loving slow and tender. Good job. I like the art work too.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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Thank you so very much Lady Rose !!!
Comment from Sarah Butterfly
Very easy and smooth poem to read. Good rhyme used throughout the stanzas enhancing the flow of your poem. Well written.
Kind regards
Sarah
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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Very easy and smooth poem to read. Good rhyme used throughout the stanzas enhancing the flow of your poem. Well written.
Kind regards
Sarah
Comment Written 22-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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Thanks so very much SB Glad you enjoyed
TK
Comment from pharp
Wow TK, for being just a little diddy you have manage to pen a very beautiful poem. This poem brought a smile on my face as I was reading, it is a very romantic and passionate work of art; exceptionally done my friend, great poetry. Thanks for sharing. Portia
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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Wow TK, for being just a little diddy you have manage to pen a very beautiful poem. This poem brought a smile on my face as I was reading, it is a very romantic and passionate work of art; exceptionally done my friend, great poetry. Thanks for sharing. Portia
Comment Written 22-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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Thank you so very much for lovely 6 Lady P. And even more glad that it brought a smile to your face as well!!
tk
Comment from Bill Schott
This is a nice little poem that suggests that there some outside the fireplace that needs tending. You tease the syllable count so I like there's a pattern, but then it gives way to word choice. Nice.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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This is a nice little poem that suggests that there some outside the fireplace that needs tending. You tease the syllable count so I like there's a pattern, but then it gives way to word choice. Nice.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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Thanks much Bill I do really appreciate you reading and commenting
TK
Comment from judiverse
You are an incurable romantic. You've created the perfect scene, with the blustery night and the fireplace going. There's something about a fireplace. Ironically, we had a fireplace where we lived in Texas and really didn't need one. Now we live in Indiana, where we could use one, and don't have one. Excellent rhyme and flow. The word choice also adds to the spell. I hate to be one to detract from the mood, but in your last stanza the correct verb is "lie," not "lay." But who cares about grammar under the circumstances? judi
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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You are an incurable romantic. You've created the perfect scene, with the blustery night and the fireplace going. There's something about a fireplace. Ironically, we had a fireplace where we lived in Texas and really didn't need one. Now we live in Indiana, where we could use one, and don't have one. Excellent rhyme and flow. The word choice also adds to the spell. I hate to be one to detract from the mood, but in your last stanza the correct verb is "lie," not "lay." But who cares about grammar under the circumstances? judi
Comment Written 22-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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Thanks much Judi I know that darn lay - lie always gets me If I said I knew how to use LAY it would be a LIE hahaha
I think I got that one right Yes?? hehe
tk
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You're very welcome. So many grammar rules. judi
Comment from ann marie mazz
top of the day TK
oh love is for all even for a moment
your words are perfect for two to share
the theme is timeless
the formatting is well executed
I enjoyed the rhyme scheme for it read beautifully
all is well within this entry
thank you for sharing your talent TK
this was a pleasure to read
stay well
ann marie
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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top of the day TK
oh love is for all even for a moment
your words are perfect for two to share
the theme is timeless
the formatting is well executed
I enjoyed the rhyme scheme for it read beautifully
all is well within this entry
thank you for sharing your talent TK
this was a pleasure to read
stay well
ann marie
Comment Written 22-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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Thank you so much Lady Ann for your kind remarks on this romantic diddy.. Much appreciated as always
TK
