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A Book of Love

Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "Reaching for you"
Assorted poems of love

18 total reviews 
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Missy, what a lovely poem of finding the love of your life and more as you say. This is wonderfully written. I liked it a lot. All the best Ulla

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2015
    Thank you Ulla...Your liking of this lil poem is a blessing to me :)

    Always,
    Missy
reply by Ulla on 21-Jul-2015
    How could I not like it Missy? it's truely lovely. Ulla
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
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Hello poet friend Missy
A very passionate poem of a long awaited love encounter. Lovely rhyming and nice flow, smooth. I enjoyed, Loyd

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 20-Jul-2015
    Passions my game... Lol. Thanks again for the lovely review Loyd :)

    Always,
    Missy
reply by Loyd C. Taylor, Sr on 21-Jul-2015
    You are very welcome, Loyd
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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This is a great presentation. The artwork is perfect. The color scheme is really good. Your message is well expressed in a short space.

I see no changes. Good job and thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 20-Jul-2015
    Thanks again hon for the sweet review :)

    Missy
Comment from TAB_that's me
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Even though it is written in darkness, it has a positive, happy ending:) Good free verse. I like the repeating line that you start each stanza with and with modification in the last one.
teresa

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 20-Jul-2015
    Thanks sug...I love feedback from you. :)

    Always,
    Missy
Comment from scongrove
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I really like this! :) The photo makes it really mysterious too! I love romantic and passionate poetry. Somehow it always reminds you of the feelings you had with someone you once loved.
Shana :)

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 20-Jul-2015
    Shana, I am at my soul a deeply romantic person. Sometimes it is driving force inside me. Thank you so much for this splendid review and lovely comments.

    Always,
    Missy
Comment from pbroussard209
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I love it when true love is found. I am a true romantic at heart and I kind of miss the feeling of falling in love. That is what was great about my husbands job, he was gone so much that I got to miss him and when he came home, we got to be fresh and new again. Now he has been home for five months, and I'm like please go visit your friends or sister in Florida for a week. don't you need to get away for a little while, lol.

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
    Thank you sug, for this wonderfully encouraging review. I appreciate this more than you know :)
    Always,
    Missy
Comment from ann marie mazz
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good morning

oh take a bow
this entry is marvelous
the theme is timeless
the words are poetic
I very much enjoyed the format
what a marvelous progression to light and love
you have also met the emotive factor
this entry is one to be read out loud
in short this entry is poetry starting with the title

thank you for sharing your talent
the presentation was well done
this was a pleasure and honor to read
enjoy the morning
ann marie

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
    Oh wow, what a completely delightful review Ann Marie. I am smiling reading this review. Thank you hon for leaving this beautiful wake up call for me :).

    Always justafan,
    Missy
reply by ann marie mazz on 19-Jul-2015
    hi missy

    you're most welcome
    be proud of this entry

    -- ann marie --
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
    I again thank you for the review hon. I am over in your page at the moment ... being nosey...lol Your very talented yourself sweet lady :)
Comment from MsPetra
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Your poem is nice. I liked that it ended on a positive note. You could have went anywhere with this. I am glad that you took it there. I especially like the way that you ended it.
Please keep writing. I will be looking forward to future offerings from you.

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
    Thank you MsPetra, for the review and the warm encouragement :).

    Always justafan,
    Missy
Comment from G.B. Smith
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Hey there Missy
OH WOW...This is very erotic in tone and caused me to yearn to be him. I love the look and feel and the artwork is superb.
I wish I had a 6th star
Bear

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
    Thanks so much Bear. The picture in fact stirred me to write this. She just looked so alone and longing. I am very grateful that you chose to review this piece with me. :)

    Always,
    Missy
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Reaching for you, is a very romantic poem about finding love at last. The kind of love that is worth holding for. Good job!

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 18-Jul-2015
    Thanks hon for the sweet review :)

    Missy