Act of Endurance
Viewing comments for Chapter 98 "Hungry"Dawn of Chaos
27 total reviews
Comment from Harry Smith
The picture and reading this poem made me hungry as well. The imagery in this poem is just outstanding and the picture selection was also outstanding all together made this poem an outstanding write. Keep writing.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
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The picture and reading this poem made me hungry as well. The imagery in this poem is just outstanding and the picture selection was also outstanding all together made this poem an outstanding write. Keep writing.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
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The artist do display a pleasing variety. Glad this write captured aspects of your interests. Thanking you for your generous rate and comforting thought.
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YOU ARE MOST WELCOME.
Comment from F Scott Hafner
Nice work! "My eyeballs flip backwards in dream" sounds more direct to me than the rest of the work. Did you intend to highlight that and if so to what purpose? Maybe, "My mind, overshadowed in dream" or something less direct? I do like how you project your love for good food.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
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Nice work! "My eyeballs flip backwards in dream" sounds more direct to me than the rest of the work. Did you intend to highlight that and if so to what purpose? Maybe, "My mind, overshadowed in dream" or something less direct? I do like how you project your love for good food.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
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Plenty pits in my writes, but seem delighting given efforts, although not precise. I do a lot of revisions. Thanking you for your generous rate and splendid views.
Comment from Gloria ....
You do write the most interesting poems, TPAC. The photograph of veggies and fruit piqued my interest immediately.
Excellent use of literary devices in your poem of cornucopia delight.
Thank you for sharing,
Gloria
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
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You do write the most interesting poems, TPAC. The photograph of veggies and fruit piqued my interest immediately.
Excellent use of literary devices in your poem of cornucopia delight.
Thank you for sharing,
Gloria
Comment Written 25-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
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I took your advise, found that pit, maybe some. Thanking you for this and the other.
Comment from Sherman541
I love fruits and vegetables they are my favorite and my mouth waters to see them. Some are so juicy it is hard to eat them, without making a mess, but the taste is oh so worth it. Such a perfect picture you painted with your words. Sherman541
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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I love fruits and vegetables they are my favorite and my mouth waters to see them. Some are so juicy it is hard to eat them, without making a mess, but the taste is oh so worth it. Such a perfect picture you painted with your words. Sherman541
Comment Written 17-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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Glad you found interests in this write, good fruit is a plus. Thanking you for your generous rate and comforting thought.
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You are very welcome, fruits are wonderful.
Comment from Liberty Justice
Good photo looks like outdoor garden store will feed lots of hungry people. I've heard of people growing their own garden in their backyard and saving lots of money. Vegetables grow well like onions, greens, sweet potatoes, corn. Well written. liberty justice
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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Good photo looks like outdoor garden store will feed lots of hungry people. I've heard of people growing their own garden in their backyard and saving lots of money. Vegetables grow well like onions, greens, sweet potatoes, corn. Well written. liberty justice
Comment Written 17-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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Gardens are a fact. Glad aspects presented in this write found pleasure. Thanking you for your generous rate and splendid views.
Comment from bmethner
The poem certainly drips with desire for the lusciousness of the beautiful produce. It speaks of letting go to the sights and smells of great food. I love the line, "tongue to drown in jucy employment." It perfectly captures the spirit of tasting a wonderful morsel. It certainly tantalizes the senses. Congratulations on being recognized.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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The poem certainly drips with desire for the lusciousness of the beautiful produce. It speaks of letting go to the sights and smells of great food. I love the line, "tongue to drown in jucy employment." It perfectly captures the spirit of tasting a wonderful morsel. It certainly tantalizes the senses. Congratulations on being recognized.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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Yeah, recognized. I do like your statement about food, this read capturing that feel. Thanking you for your generous rate and comforting comments.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about hunger in a dream seeing fruits, aim to get high satisfaction, refreshment, real love for eating; well said, well done. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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This speaks about hunger in a dream seeing fruits, aim to get high satisfaction, refreshment, real love for eating; well said, well done. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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The fear was the real test, whether to take some of these delight, not being my property. Glad you found this work pleasing. Thanking you for your generous rate and comforting comments.
Comment from Debbie Pope
I like this poem. Clever, humorous depiction of human appetites. I like--"A grip on my tummy" and "my eyeballs flip backwards". Those are great images. You would think they are exaggerated, but they are not. Good job.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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I like this poem. Clever, humorous depiction of human appetites. I like--"A grip on my tummy" and "my eyeballs flip backwards". Those are great images. You would think they are exaggerated, but they are not. Good job.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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Your statements are delightful, enduring nightmares with my writes, seeing some break of sun. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching views.
Comment from Ella Gott
Awesome! I hope you keep writing like this, keep posting! I will keep a sharp lookout for new posts. Don't let me down LOL! 5 Stars for sure, keep it up up up!
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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Awesome! I hope you keep writing like this, keep posting! I will keep a sharp lookout for new posts. Don't let me down LOL! 5 Stars for sure, keep it up up up!
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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I see this write banged your cords, get tired wanting for post tap my title, then you will view the whole project. Thanking you for your generous rate and splendid views.
Comment from Christina Tsillas
This is amazing and my first ever 6-stars.
Congrats on an amazing job! I would love to give you a helpful review with points to improve on, but to be honest, I can't think of any (which is a first for me haha).
Good Luck!
Christina
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2016
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This is amazing and my first ever 6-stars.
Congrats on an amazing job! I would love to give you a helpful review with points to improve on, but to be honest, I can't think of any (which is a first for me haha).
Good Luck!
Christina
Comment Written 13-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2016
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Love your review, glad aspects of this write found interests. Thanking you for generous rate and captivating views.