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Lost

Childhood can never be regained.

8 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
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This three-five-three about water, Lost, takes what I think is a unique take on water as tears. The poem, in its brevity, alludes to the long term suffering from abuse. Good job.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2015

reply by the author on 08-Jul-2015
    Thank you Bill Schott for reviewing my poem and your kind comments.
Comment from ellie6
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This one has impact. Everything about it shouts. The illustration is so apt, it really draws one in. Tis poem speaks far more than the som of a few words..disturbing.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2015

reply by the author on 08-Jul-2015
    Ellie, thank you for commenting on my poem. Yes, I wanted it to have impact. Glad you saw it that way.
Comment from TPAC
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Writer has a good stir of items for this mix, selection I find descriptive detailing a grim situation of abuse, I've been abused but this form is a nightmare

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2015

reply by the author on 08-Jul-2015
    TPAC, thank you for your review. Sorry, for your abuse. It does last a life time but does not have to define our lives.
Comment from jules4jesus
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wow so heart rendering so true i can totally understand the picture and the poem hope this wasnt through personal experience nasty things any way Great words and good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2015

reply by the author on 08-Jul-2015
    Thank you jules for your kind review and concern. No, I was not abused as a child but have experienced it in my line
    of work as a nurse.
reply by jules4jesus on 09-Jul-2015
    oh my that is good then
Comment from angel123
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I enjoyed reading your meaningful, heartfelt poem. It is well written with a powerful message about child abuse. It flows well and your artwork choice goes well with your thoughts.

Angel123

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2015

reply by the author on 08-Jul-2015
    Thanks angel for your kind review and comments.
Comment from danpald
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The count is well
The theme as well
Water from tears
Met so well

The theme is needed
The message sent
Good luck with the contest
It will be tight

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2015

reply by the author on 08-Jul-2015
    Danpald, your review is welcomed and appreciated.
Comment from dragonpoet
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The poem and artwork clear in its theme. Abuse lasts for your whole life. Childhood and innocence is gone.

Good luck in the contest

Keep writing

dragonpoet

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2015

reply by the author on 08-Jul-2015
    dragonpoet, thank you for your review. Yes, abuse does last a life time. But there is healing of those wounds with only memories left.
reply by dragonpoet on 08-Jul-2015
    You're welcome. I am glad

    dragonpoet
Comment from Linda Kay
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It is amazing (and very sad topic) how much you can convey in just six words! The picture does a good job complimenting your words too.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2015

reply by the author on 08-Jul-2015
    Thank you Linda Kay for your comments and review.