Act of Endurance
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Comment from i do truly Love you my precious wife misses S
May we be giving kind Loving to GOD TO HEAR HIM AND DO WHAT HIS VERY WORD IS TELLING FOREVERMORE UNTO US HIS VERY CHILDREN THAT THE SON OF GOD JESUS CHRIST OUR LORD AND SAVIOR HAS MADE ALL POSSIBLE IN OUR NAMES..Amen..May we be gathered together to worship on the Sabbath this is of a willing desire to do within holy ACTION...being of MIND HEART SOUL SPIRITS TO DO WHAT OUR FATHER GODS WORD is saying to each of us that will Listen to the Son of God and go fourth carrying our cross that our conscious is cleansed of all unrighteousness Amen..for it is our Father GODS WILL THAT WE ARE SET FREE FROM SIN.and Renewed in his son Christ Jesus likeness Amen
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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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May we be giving kind Loving to GOD TO HEAR HIM AND DO WHAT HIS VERY WORD IS TELLING FOREVERMORE UNTO US HIS VERY CHILDREN THAT THE SON OF GOD JESUS CHRIST OUR LORD AND SAVIOR HAS MADE ALL POSSIBLE IN OUR NAMES..Amen..May we be gathered together to worship on the Sabbath this is of a willing desire to do within holy ACTION...being of MIND HEART SOUL SPIRITS TO DO WHAT OUR FATHER GODS WORD is saying to each of us that will Listen to the Son of God and go fourth carrying our cross that our conscious is cleansed of all unrighteousness Amen..for it is our Father GODS WILL THAT WE ARE SET FREE FROM SIN.and Renewed in his son Christ Jesus likeness Amen
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Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Good sermon acknowledging you do remember the words, finding agreement with certain statements, thanking you for this generous rate repealing evil, trying to do better.
Comment from Eve Vasa
Hi, I enjoyed the flow of this one and I do like that picture you've used, it has a cross but the poem is about the Sabbath.
This is my favourite stanza:
' ...Joy put toast of cheer submitted to the family, rejoicing glad no gaffs to doubt, laugh a roast drop tear, fighting fear a boast defied at death ...'
This worked for me, it became personal. We have a lot of joy on our toast at the moment, lol, and are laughing a few roast-drop tears.
And the last bit, ' ... fighting fear a boast defied at death ...' Very nicely put!! Do the bravest of warriors always fight fear? Maybe, unless they have the mindset that death is a good thing, that it is just another stage in the evolving Chrysalis-events of a more continuous consciousness. But if you believe you are fated, then it frees you from a lot of fear if you embrace it, because their is absolutely nothing you can do to avoid what is already written. So what is there to be afraid of? I hope that that makes sense, and I believe we are fated. My father loved nothing more than to drop us out of a helicopter with a Swiss army knife, compass and a bag of a few things (first aid kit), plus a can of rid because mosquitoes can interrupt the learning, lol. Toughen us up. I used to hate the jump, but over time, I realised that if I was going to die jumping out of a helicopter, then there was nothing I could do to change it. At that point I stopped hating and just screamed with the excitement all the way down, hahahha He did come back for us after a while. He loves us, he did it to make us strong... and it does.
Thanks for sharing your unique style, and enjoy the rest of your day, Eve.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Hi, I enjoyed the flow of this one and I do like that picture you've used, it has a cross but the poem is about the Sabbath.
This is my favourite stanza:
' ...Joy put toast of cheer submitted to the family, rejoicing glad no gaffs to doubt, laugh a roast drop tear, fighting fear a boast defied at death ...'
This worked for me, it became personal. We have a lot of joy on our toast at the moment, lol, and are laughing a few roast-drop tears.
And the last bit, ' ... fighting fear a boast defied at death ...' Very nicely put!! Do the bravest of warriors always fight fear? Maybe, unless they have the mindset that death is a good thing, that it is just another stage in the evolving Chrysalis-events of a more continuous consciousness. But if you believe you are fated, then it frees you from a lot of fear if you embrace it, because their is absolutely nothing you can do to avoid what is already written. So what is there to be afraid of? I hope that that makes sense, and I believe we are fated. My father loved nothing more than to drop us out of a helicopter with a Swiss army knife, compass and a bag of a few things (first aid kit), plus a can of rid because mosquitoes can interrupt the learning, lol. Toughen us up. I used to hate the jump, but over time, I realised that if I was going to die jumping out of a helicopter, then there was nothing I could do to change it. At that point I stopped hating and just screamed with the excitement all the way down, hahahha He did come back for us after a while. He loves us, he did it to make us strong... and it does.
Thanks for sharing your unique style, and enjoy the rest of your day, Eve.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Yeah! What love got to do with it? Your comments touch many factors, thanking you first for your generous rate and a delighting viewpoint into your past, instructing me clearly what was being stated by you. I do understand and appreciate those insights.
Comment from Jeffrey Ford
I think that you wrote a great and amazing spiritual poem. It is very well written and thank you for uplifting God. Thank you for sharing! God Bless you!
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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I think that you wrote a great and amazing spiritual poem. It is very well written and thank you for uplifting God. Thank you for sharing! God Bless you!
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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I guess two views of religious held concepts were attracted by this write, appreciating them both trying to understand the truth line between divided houses. God is unity. Satan is diversity. All stated in my given opinion in this particular write
Comment from F Scott Hafner
Thank you for sharing that! THE WORLD NEEDS MUCH MORE LOVE RIGHT NOW. And you are making that happen. Sowing hate and intolerance is so simple to do. To sow love is harder but well worth it.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018
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Thank you for sharing that! THE WORLD NEEDS MUCH MORE LOVE RIGHT NOW. And you are making that happen. Sowing hate and intolerance is so simple to do. To sow love is harder but well worth it.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018
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No I thank you for your comment. I'm in total agreement with your given viws. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching words.
Comment from Lakieshae
Beautiful prayer poem, we all need to have faith regardless the type or reason for the prayer.. who are we to judge? we only are one universe. Beautiful write.
ONE NATION UNDER GOD....
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018
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Beautiful prayer poem, we all need to have faith regardless the type or reason for the prayer.. who are we to judge? we only are one universe. Beautiful write.
ONE NATION UNDER GOD....
Comment Written 05-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018
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They say one is a lonely number, I guess I have to wait death to find out. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching views.
Comment from Jean Lutz
Your words capture God's plan of creation and mankind. Such as sleep is needed for the physical body, the Sabbath is for the soul's rest. Third stanza from bottom, last line "whin" -- did you mean when or whine or is this a word I am not getting?
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Your words capture God's plan of creation and mankind. Such as sleep is needed for the physical body, the Sabbath is for the soul's rest. Third stanza from bottom, last line "whin" -- did you mean when or whine or is this a word I am not getting?
Comment Written 05-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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I did mean whines. Thank you for your assistance in making this write more coherent. Thanking you for your generous rate and splendid views about this work.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
We all need belief to be sure.
I like your verse. Well written, a good message. And the artwork is lovely.
Thank you for sharing this piece with us.
Sharon
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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We all need belief to be sure.
I like your verse. Well written, a good message. And the artwork is lovely.
Thank you for sharing this piece with us.
Sharon
Comment Written 24-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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I thank the painter and the thought, verse and picture unknown to other, seen joined brought joy to the artist. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed thoughts.
Comment from apky
This is beautiful and I have to admit that I'm completely in agreement with you. In today's chaos and life on the fast track, we all need belief and faith to protect us from all the tempting drugs, booze, gambling and all other evils that afflict us human beings. To put our faith in science alone used as a commodity for the accumulation of wealth and power will only leave us spiritually impoverished.
Excellent work.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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This is beautiful and I have to admit that I'm completely in agreement with you. In today's chaos and life on the fast track, we all need belief and faith to protect us from all the tempting drugs, booze, gambling and all other evils that afflict us human beings. To put our faith in science alone used as a commodity for the accumulation of wealth and power will only leave us spiritually impoverished.
Excellent work.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Wow! I said all that. I'm charmed by your statements able to comprehend splattered views to see your thoughts. Glad for the connection and joined beliefs of thoughts. Thanking you for your appreciated response.
Comment from Sherman541
This reminiscent of the child's prayer, " Now I lay me down to sleep". Though it is much different. More like or as if both a parent and child are praying together. Very nice choice of pictures and it goes well with the poem of prayers. Very nicely written. Sherman
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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This reminiscent of the child's prayer, " Now I lay me down to sleep". Though it is much different. More like or as if both a parent and child are praying together. Very nice choice of pictures and it goes well with the poem of prayers. Very nicely written. Sherman
Comment Written 24-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Tha artist really captured this feeling well, hoping my words doesn't blur its treasured intent, needing its sight more than words. Thanking you for your generous rate and comforting comments.
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you are welcome
Comment from tfawcus
A prayer that is filled for the best part with optimism and positivity. What is this life for but to create and spread love? Belief and faith go far in this regard.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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A prayer that is filled for the best part with optimism and positivity. What is this life for but to create and spread love? Belief and faith go far in this regard.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Wise statements, touching notes to the heart, compelling views of tranquility. Thanking you for your generous rate and splendid views.
