Christine's Poems
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Comment from petalangela
So sorry you feel sad. But the friendship link was there to the end. As she passed overhead on her way to heaven she brushed lightly over you.
In return you felt the contact and wrote this this truly moving poem
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2015
So sorry you feel sad. But the friendship link was there to the end. As she passed overhead on her way to heaven she brushed lightly over you.
In return you felt the contact and wrote this this truly moving poem
Comment Written 07-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2015
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Thanks petalangela for reading and reviewing my poem and I liked your lovely comment and perhaps we did connect like you said what a lovely way to say our last goodbye. I will always have my lovely memories of her and still smile when I think of her. With appreciation for your comments Cheers Christine😃
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Wow, this is a pretty sad song and very well written. Good job! Nice rhyming and flow. The format is attractive and I like the picture/drawing.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2015
Wow, this is a pretty sad song and very well written. Good job! Nice rhyming and flow. The format is attractive and I like the picture/drawing.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2015
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Thanks Gypsy Blue Rose for your review and comments re the format etc. Yes it was a sad day when my friend died and I regret not getting a chance to see her before she passed, but I know she knew I cared. Good memories last for ever Cheers Christine😊
Comment from dmt1967
This is a very true poem my friend. When I left school we all promised to keep in touch but never did. I often wonder what became of them. I enjoyed reading your poem and am sorry about your friend.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2015
This is a very true poem my friend. When I left school we all promised to keep in touch but never did. I often wonder what became of them. I enjoyed reading your poem and am sorry about your friend.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2015
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thanks dmt1967 for reading and reviewing this poem we all have good intentions but seldom follow through, Why don't you look up your friends never too late. Appreciate your comments Cheers Christine😀
Comment from Brett Matthew West
One of life's biggest regrets can be that you did not spend time with someone you care about while they were still alive and you could have. Should have, would have, did not is a tough position to find yourself in. This well written poem paints this message crystal clearly. Well done.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2015
One of life's biggest regrets can be that you did not spend time with someone you care about while they were still alive and you could have. Should have, would have, did not is a tough position to find yourself in. This well written poem paints this message crystal clearly. Well done.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2015
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Thanks Brett I am glad you liked this message and as always your support is great to receive. I try a bit harder to keep in touch now with my friends and family .Cheers Christine😀
Comment from gamay
Hello Chrissy,This is a very good poem you write it touch me so much.And I learn a good lesson. Thanks for shsring. Happy weekend. gamay
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2015
Hello Chrissy,This is a very good poem you write it touch me so much.And I learn a good lesson. Thanks for shsring. Happy weekend. gamay
Comment Written 05-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2015
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Hi gamay. Thanks for your review and lovely comments. And glad you have learnt something, put it too good use then . I will have a good weekend. Cheers Christine 😃
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is so very true that the author has written with this piece of work. I have had similar experiences myself. Well done.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2015
This is so very true that the author has written with this piece of work. I have had similar experiences myself. Well done.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2015
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Thank you Tomes Johnston for stopping by to read my poem I am glad you thought it well done. We must all take the time to see each other more often and to say our feelings without reservation being too late has many regrets appreciate you review and rating Cheers Christine
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My pleasure
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Cheers
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Christine...
_ No truer words spoken then these in your poem.
_ I lost a dear friend many years ago to cancer. So very sad she died a young age.
_ This made me thing of a dear friend I haven't seen in many years since we live in different states. I believe I'll give her a call.
_ Touching poem.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2015
Hi, Christine...
_ No truer words spoken then these in your poem.
_ I lost a dear friend many years ago to cancer. So very sad she died a young age.
_ This made me thing of a dear friend I haven't seen in many years since we live in different states. I believe I'll give her a call.
_ Touching poem.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
Comment Written 04-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2015
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Thanks Jax for you lovely comments and review and yes we can get caught up in the must do's so. I hope you have a great phone call to your friend Cheers Christine😀
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is lovely and conveys a resounding lesson for all to learn. If we live each day as if it is our last, then we will never take those we love for granted and use each second given us to the fullest. Beautifully penned and thoroughly elevating in construction and content. Thank you for sharing it.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2015
This is lovely and conveys a resounding lesson for all to learn. If we live each day as if it is our last, then we will never take those we love for granted and use each second given us to the fullest. Beautifully penned and thoroughly elevating in construction and content. Thank you for sharing it.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2015
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Thank you Mystic Angel for your review and lovely comments for my poem. You always give constructive and thoughtful feedback and I appreciate your support .Cheers Christine😃