The envelope
Don't let him get away.2 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
This form is much a harder to create than it appears. I liked your mono-verse rhyme and sentimental artwork. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2015
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This form is much a harder to create than it appears. I liked your mono-verse rhyme and sentimental artwork. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 28-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2015
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It is tough. Not my favorite form but it does present a challenge. Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Glasstruth
Nice enjambment, especially with a rhyme that sounds so natural is amazing. Just eight syllables and I know writing something like this is not easy. Superb. Good luck with the contest. Les
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2015
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Nice enjambment, especially with a rhyme that sounds so natural is amazing. Just eight syllables and I know writing something like this is not easy. Superb. Good luck with the contest. Les
Comment Written 28-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2015
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It is a challenging form. Thanks for the kind review.