under the ferns
a funny poem7 total reviews
Comment from Green Lake Girl
Decided to check out this contest winner. Such a cute poem. I wrote a story about a leprechaun last year, hence I'm a sucker for anything leprechaun-ish. I love the fact you were left holding his vest. Congratulations on your contest win.
Didn't realize you made jewelry. I'll have to check out your Etsy site.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2015
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Decided to check out this contest winner. Such a cute poem. I wrote a story about a leprechaun last year, hence I'm a sucker for anything leprechaun-ish. I love the fact you were left holding his vest. Congratulations on your contest win.
Didn't realize you made jewelry. I'll have to check out your Etsy site.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2015
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Hi Green Lake Girl, thanks for the review, my little etsy shop is closed now but I hope to open soon. cool beach jewelery from zanzibar. cheers j
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Yes, I looked for your shop and didn't find it. Let me know when it opens!
Comment from Kellytr
I enjoyed this enchanting story of the mad little leprechaun but I didn't know they hide in ferns whistling. I'll keep an ear open in future. Seems they also squeal and tell fibs. I see a follow-on story for this poem. You left me wanting to know more of what happened next. Surely he'll come looking for his vest? Cheers, Kelly
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2015
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I enjoyed this enchanting story of the mad little leprechaun but I didn't know they hide in ferns whistling. I'll keep an ear open in future. Seems they also squeal and tell fibs. I see a follow-on story for this poem. You left me wanting to know more of what happened next. Surely he'll come looking for his vest? Cheers, Kelly
Comment Written 02-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2015
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Ha ha, They will do anything to keep their gold, including lying. So far I have three little vests and a tiny pair of shoes. Thanks for the review Kelly, cheers j
Comment from TPAC
Lovely in its conveyance poet displays talents well in this work giving the reader a creative story in expressed poetic form A great write
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2015
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Lovely in its conveyance poet displays talents well in this work giving the reader a creative story in expressed poetic form A great write
Comment Written 01-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2015
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Thanks for the generous review TPAC. It was fun to write this one. I appreciate your thoughts on this one, cheers
Comment from BeasPeas
Your poem did bring a smile with its good rhyming in this clearly written little story poem. And he got away. Oh no! There goes the chance for the gold. Marilyn/BeasPeas
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2015
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Your poem did bring a smile with its good rhyming in this clearly written little story poem. And he got away. Oh no! There goes the chance for the gold. Marilyn/BeasPeas
Comment Written 01-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2015
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Ha ha thanks for the kind review, I appreciate your input on this one, cheers
Comment from RYME4U
This is really cute and funny. It rhymes well and it is very rhythmical! I like the uplifting spirit of this jolly wee poem. Great job!
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2015
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This is really cute and funny. It rhymes well and it is very rhythmical! I like the uplifting spirit of this jolly wee poem. Great job!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2015
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Thanks for the encouraging review RYME4U,. It was fun to write, cheers
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, mystery writer, you did an excellent job capturing the scheming nature of the leprechaun as he doesn't want to let go of his gold. good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2015
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this is an excellent write, mystery writer, you did an excellent job capturing the scheming nature of the leprechaun as he doesn't want to let go of his gold. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2015
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hah, second time this week, thanks for the encouraging review, cheers
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Guess you did not get his pot of gold after all. Smart leprechaun. Poem not particularly funny to me but does add a touch of humor. Well written and should be a good contest entry.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2015
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Guess you did not get his pot of gold after all. Smart leprechaun. Poem not particularly funny to me but does add a touch of humor. Well written and should be a good contest entry.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2015
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Thanks Brett, second time this week, haha I appreciate your review, cheers j