Comment from artisart4u

Exceptional

Congratulations on your win.

You haiku is very clean to understand.

You also have the right amount of syllables that was required.

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2015

Thanks for the review. I find these ones tricky, having to rhyme all three words, plus make sense. I appreciate the 6 stars, very encouraging, cheers j

Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hello author, Ahhh, a poem of yearning for one's true love. When it comes to poetry, "blue" is such an interesting word and subject. Of note:

my heart is missing you

(True blue, and loyal to the end, indeed.)

As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2015

Thanks LateBloomer, I appreciate your thoughts on this one, cheers

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is an excellent 1 6 1 poem, mystery writer, blue is the heart where one half is gone, these things are hard to write when it makes sense too. good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2015

Thanks sweetwoodjax. yeah, the rhyming makes it hard to make sense and find le mot just... I appreciate the support, have a nice Sunday, cheers

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

I liked this well thought out 1-6-1 poem you have entered for the competition.

So very true for so many reasons.
A nice write and good luck.

GMG

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2015

Argh, I read the fine print and the three lines have to rhyme. But I think I will keep this one too, thanks for the review GMG, cheers