Get Well, Brooke!
Viewing comments for Chapter 93 "Rainbows awaiting."Writing for Brooke
12 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I enjoyed reading your poem, what a nice tribute to your friend Brooke. Good rhythm and even flow and pretty picture. Nicely done!
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2015
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I enjoyed reading your poem, what a nice tribute to your friend Brooke. Good rhythm and even flow and pretty picture. Nicely done!
Comment Written 20-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2015
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Thankyou Gypsy Blue Rose for reading and for your comments, much appreciated.
Comment from Linda Kay
This did a good job of saying what you wanted to say without any rhymes. It build and flowed well in the nonette format. It is a nice show of support and community from a Fanstory friend.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2015
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This did a good job of saying what you wanted to say without any rhymes. It build and flowed well in the nonette format. It is a nice show of support and community from a Fanstory friend.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2015
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Thankyou Linda for reading and for your comments, much appreciated.
Comment from Jackarrie
Hi Pearl
This is a lovely tribute to Brooke and a great addition to the multi-author book I believe you have included the important facts that we miss reading about in dear Brookes poems.
Well done. Mary
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2015
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Hi Pearl
This is a lovely tribute to Brooke and a great addition to the multi-author book I believe you have included the important facts that we miss reading about in dear Brookes poems.
Well done. Mary
Comment Written 19-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2015
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Many thanks Jackarrie for reading and for your comments. Truly appreciated.
Comment from Mastery
Very well done, Pearl. I know brooke will like this one a lot. It shines with get well wishes and even mentions Sawyer, the apple of her eye. Good addition to the book and good poetry .. Bob
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2015
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Very well done, Pearl. I know brooke will like this one a lot. It shines with get well wishes and even mentions Sawyer, the apple of her eye. Good addition to the book and good poetry .. Bob
Comment Written 18-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2015
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Many thanks Bob for reading and for these comments. I picked this style because Brooke does so many different styles of poetry. Appreciate your lovely comments.
valda
Comment from ~Dovey
This is a lovely tribute Nonet to Brooke. I am sure it will be well appreciated, and the sentiment echoed throughout the community. It was the first to alert me that something was wrong, I've been away awhile. I truly hope for the best for her to be posting again, soon.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2015
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This is a lovely tribute Nonet to Brooke. I am sure it will be well appreciated, and the sentiment echoed throughout the community. It was the first to alert me that something was wrong, I've been away awhile. I truly hope for the best for her to be posting again, soon.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2015
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Thankyou Dovey for reading and for your comments. Yes she has been missing for a while now. I believe she is, or has been in hospital. Her rhymes are missed. thanks again for reading.
valda
Comment from TAB_that's me
I'm sure Brooke will love the form you used, nonet-reverse nonet. It is a lovely tribute to her. Nicely done.
~~Teresa~~
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2015
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I'm sure Brooke will love the form you used, nonet-reverse nonet. It is a lovely tribute to her. Nicely done.
~~Teresa~~
Comment Written 18-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2015
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Thankyou Teresa for reading and for your lovely comments, much appreciated. I'm glad you feel Brooke will enjoy. thanks again.
Comment from Halfree
Thought this quite clever; the lines growing shorter in word count and then reversing in second verse; like the last three of the second verse. The second verse not as strong as the first...first was concentrating on Brook, the second seemed to move away from Brooke.
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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2015
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Thought this quite clever; the lines growing shorter in word count and then reversing in second verse; like the last three of the second verse. The second verse not as strong as the first...first was concentrating on Brook, the second seemed to move away from Brooke.
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Comment Written 18-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2015
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Thankyou Halfree for reading and for your comments, much appreciate your time.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A nice addition to the book, and I am sure your poem will be appreciated.
-Nice job using a different format, but getting across your best wishes for Brooke.
-So many wonderful images, beginning with the first line.
-Effective references to things she writes about, especially her grandson.
-The last two lines are a very nice way to end the poem.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2015
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-A nice addition to the book, and I am sure your poem will be appreciated.
-Nice job using a different format, but getting across your best wishes for Brooke.
-So many wonderful images, beginning with the first line.
-Effective references to things she writes about, especially her grandson.
-The last two lines are a very nice way to end the poem.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2015
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Thankyou respa1 for reading and for all your comments. Truly appreciated.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Nosha17
A nice tribute to Brooke, she will certainly be overjoyed with all the lovely tributes she has received. Nice imagery and well chosen words. Good accompanying image. Faye
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2015
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A nice tribute to Brooke, she will certainly be overjoyed with all the lovely tributes she has received. Nice imagery and well chosen words. Good accompanying image. Faye
Comment Written 18-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2015
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Thankyou Faye for reading. Yes I think Brooke will be surprised at how many are already in this multi author book. Many thanks for reading mine.
Comment from dmt1967
This is a nice poem and message to a great woman. She is a part of all our lives on fanstory and we need her back. This site is good, but it is great when Brooke is here writing her poems and reading ours. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2015
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This is a nice poem and message to a great woman. She is a part of all our lives on fanstory and we need her back. This site is good, but it is great when Brooke is here writing her poems and reading ours. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2015
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Thankyou dmt1967 for reading my tribute to Brooke. Yes she is very giving with her reviews and help and of course her love rhymes. Thanks again for reading.