Thoughtful Poems and Prose
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Comment from seaglass
There is so much energy and mystery in a storm, I can't help but be fascinated. Your Pleiades poem accurately describes the stages and progress of Mother Earth acting out.
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There is so much energy and mystery in a storm, I can't help but be fascinated. Your Pleiades poem accurately describes the stages and progress of Mother Earth acting out.
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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2015
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Thank you.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Well, you certainly have managed to weave many eloquent words into your Pleiades poetry entry, Anonymous, and those eloquent words conjure up behind the mind's eye some very stunning visual imagery.
Thanks so much for sharing, and good luck to you. ~Dean
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Well, you certainly have managed to weave many eloquent words into your Pleiades poetry entry, Anonymous, and those eloquent words conjure up behind the mind's eye some very stunning visual imagery.
Thanks so much for sharing, and good luck to you. ~Dean
Comment Written 17-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2015
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Thank you.
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Yep
Comment from Bill Schott
This Pleiades, Storm, delivers a lot of turbulence with the passages that are displayed to represent a storms qualities. It's very descriptive and energetic. Nice job.
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This Pleiades, Storm, delivers a lot of turbulence with the passages that are displayed to represent a storms qualities. It's very descriptive and energetic. Nice job.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2015
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Thank you, Bill.
Comment from RYME4U
This is well done. The scenes you set with your words are very descriptive. Your free verse runs smoothly and the pleiades style is done correctly. Good job!
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015
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This is well done. The scenes you set with your words are very descriptive. Your free verse runs smoothly and the pleiades style is done correctly. Good job!
Comment Written 16-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015
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Thank you for your kind comments.
Comment from Michael Wahl
good job on the poem's structural requirements, with some internal rhyming thrown in for good measure; I always enjoy poems about storms, as the subject matter can be so diverse.
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good job on the poem's structural requirements, with some internal rhyming thrown in for good measure; I always enjoy poems about storms, as the subject matter can be so diverse.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2015
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Thank you!
Comment from Master Philip
I like this poem. I always feel at peace when watching a storm brewing. There's something majestic about witnessing it build. Great job putting me there and giving me that sensation.
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I like this poem. I always feel at peace when watching a storm brewing. There's something majestic about witnessing it build. Great job putting me there and giving me that sensation.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2015
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Thank you for your kind review. I really appreciate your special review and rating.
Nicole
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great presentation. The artwork is awesome. Good use of alliteration throughout. Good job with the prompt.
I see no changes. Good job and best wishes in the contest.
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This is a great presentation. The artwork is awesome. Good use of alliteration throughout. Good job with the prompt.
I see no changes. Good job and best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2015
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Thank you for reading and enjoying.
Comment from Serendipity!
Very descriptive. Silent, stormy sky with segregated grey clouds slipping by.(easy to see) ALso easy to picture the increasing momentum of the wind, and the changing faces of the upcoming storm. You were able to get your picture 'painted' within the self imposed restraint of starting each line with the same letter.
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Very descriptive. Silent, stormy sky with segregated grey clouds slipping by.(easy to see) ALso easy to picture the increasing momentum of the wind, and the changing faces of the upcoming storm. You were able to get your picture 'painted' within the self imposed restraint of starting each line with the same letter.
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Thank you for your kind comments.
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You're welcome!
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You're welcome!
Comment from lancellot
Very nice. I like the slow build of the storm as it develops and then hits. Great idea and use of the letter 'S'. It flowed naturally.
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Very nice. I like the slow build of the storm as it develops and then hits. Great idea and use of the letter 'S'. It flowed naturally.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2015
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Thank you for your kind comments.
Comment from Jacob Collins
I've always loved a good storm and you can always feel it in the air whenever there's a certain mugginess around, that's the part I don't like. We get that sometimes and then we don't get the storm. I enjoyed reading your piece, I thought that your writing flowed well and I couldn't find any faults. Good luck in the contest...Jacob
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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015
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I've always loved a good storm and you can always feel it in the air whenever there's a certain mugginess around, that's the part I don't like. We get that sometimes and then we don't get the storm. I enjoyed reading your piece, I thought that your writing flowed well and I couldn't find any faults. Good luck in the contest...Jacob
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015
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Thank you for your kind comments.
