haiku (Waves crash)
one-line haiku4 total reviews
Comment from Donya Quijote
Contest rules say no art work. You might want to eliminate the picture before voting begin as it might be grounds for disqualification. Besides a haiku, even a one liner should be able to stand on its own. Haiku generally doesn't have capital letters unless the noun in a proper noun. Nice imagery. Visually appealing...
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015
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Contest rules say no art work. You might want to eliminate the picture before voting begin as it might be grounds for disqualification. Besides a haiku, even a one liner should be able to stand on its own. Haiku generally doesn't have capital letters unless the noun in a proper noun. Nice imagery. Visually appealing...
Comment Written 15-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015
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Thanks I thought that but when I was sent to place my poem it recommended a picture.
Comment from judester
This is a great entry, but for title, put .. haiku (waves crash) Good luck with the contest. cheers judester I love the imagery in this one.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015
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This is a great entry, but for title, put .. haiku (waves crash) Good luck with the contest. cheers judester I love the imagery in this one.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015
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Thanks for the comments.
Comment from Dawny53
Very, very pretty.. the image is terrific.. I think it's a great entry.. but yet I also think it would stand just fine all by itself without an image.. your descriptions are vivid enough.. and I really think you would impress voters even more without an image..
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015
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Very, very pretty.. the image is terrific.. I think it's a great entry.. but yet I also think it would stand just fine all by itself without an image.. your descriptions are vivid enough.. and I really think you would impress voters even more without an image..
Comment Written 15-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015
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Thanks I also think they wanted no image but then it was recommended. I am going to get rid of the picture before the voting.
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
Please notice that rules say "no art work," so unless the picture is removed I'm sure it will be disqualified by the committee. I'd suggest changing the title to "haiku (waves crash)" instead of as you have it. (I meant the "few words from first of poem" to explain how to arrive at a title, not to be used verbatim.) Let me know if you remove the picture and I may change my rating. Good luck, Jeanie Mercer
(I have changed my rating to 5 stars since you made changes and got rid of the picture.)
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015
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Please notice that rules say "no art work," so unless the picture is removed I'm sure it will be disqualified by the committee. I'd suggest changing the title to "haiku (waves crash)" instead of as you have it. (I meant the "few words from first of poem" to explain how to arrive at a title, not to be used verbatim.) Let me know if you remove the picture and I may change my rating. Good luck, Jeanie Mercer
(I have changed my rating to 5 stars since you made changes and got rid of the picture.)
Comment Written 15-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015
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I also thought they wanted no picture. Then when sent to place the poem it was recomended. I am getting rid of the picture and changing the title. thank you
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The entrance screen gave bad advice about the picture in this case. The rules to follow are the ones given with the contest itself. Glad you removed the picture, and also that you changed the title. (The committee would not disqualify you for the title, but they would for the picture, and I would hate for that to happen.)
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Thank you I just submitted a poem with the picture and have the contest line alone. that was my plan but then looked for a picture but could not find one that i see with the poem itself. So it is much better alone.