Christine's Poems
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Comment from Patricia L. Settoon
Excellent. Humorous while having the reader feel the customs taught to each of us in our own backgrounds ingrained as children. Though nothing wrong with this, others feel the need to make some feel less than. Once that happens, then no one is comfortable expressing their own uniqueness. You have shown how ridiculous this is. We are a country of people who come from every corner of the world. We should embrace this and celebrate everyone as you have done in a wonderful way! Go Girl Go!
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2016
Excellent. Humorous while having the reader feel the customs taught to each of us in our own backgrounds ingrained as children. Though nothing wrong with this, others feel the need to make some feel less than. Once that happens, then no one is comfortable expressing their own uniqueness. You have shown how ridiculous this is. We are a country of people who come from every corner of the world. We should embrace this and celebrate everyone as you have done in a wonderful way! Go Girl Go!
Comment Written 28-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2016
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Hi Patricia, Thank you so much for reading my poem I am so pleased you liked it and sent me this review. I am really stoked. Sometimes I womder what is happening to us all in the PC noncense LOL. glad to meet you also. Many Cheers Christine 😃
Comment from Mark Valentine
I just came across this one - I imagine you must have gotten a ton of great reviews and "amens" for this one (is it politically correct to say "amen"?). I wish I had a six to give it. I thought the U.S. was the only country that had such nonsense. Sign me up for your club.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2015
I just came across this one - I imagine you must have gotten a ton of great reviews and "amens" for this one (is it politically correct to say "amen"?). I wish I had a six to give it. I thought the U.S. was the only country that had such nonsense. Sign me up for your club.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2015
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Thanks so much Mark . No it is world wide lol and and I could probably write another one . Your in ha ha . I sometimes think the world has gone mad ( at times it has but all the crap that some sets go on with Pleassssssssssse. I had fun with this one and there is a lot more material to use ( excuse my cynical brain.ha ha ) glad you had a read Wtih Cheers Christine😀😀
Comment from TPAC
A super write, writer explodes bursting forth their talents capturing the notice of reader coating them with all sorts of pleasurable delights, a true compelling write
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2015
A super write, writer explodes bursting forth their talents capturing the notice of reader coating them with all sorts of pleasurable delights, a true compelling write
Comment Written 28-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2015
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Thank you TPAC for commenting on my poem . I am really happy you enjoyed this satire and I did have fun composing this. Not much sugar coating though lol With appreciation and good Cheers to you Christine😀
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Thank you TPAC for commenting on my poem . I am really happy you enjoyed this satire and I did have fun composing this. Not much sugar coating though lol With appreciation and good Cheers to you Christine😀
Comment from joeruptak
Very well done, I know you don't want to offend anyone
but I hope all those politically correct advocates are
offended and angry as hell.
Very well written, the flow was great and I could hardly wait for the next line. If it were allowed, I would give you all of my six stars
. Great job
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2015
Very well done, I know you don't want to offend anyone
but I hope all those politically correct advocates are
offended and angry as hell.
Very well written, the flow was great and I could hardly wait for the next line. If it were allowed, I would give you all of my six stars
. Great job
Comment Written 26-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2015
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Wow joeruptak thank you so much for your fabulous rating and review for my poem written from being sick of being told what to do and say related to everyday things and history etc. I had fun writing this and the words just kept coming, maybe a second poem is in the wind plenty of material. I am so glad you liked the sentiments and so much appreciate your review and comments. No fee to join lol Cheers Christine😀😀
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Wow joeruptak thank you so much for your fabulous rating and review for my poem written from being sick of being told what to do and say related to everyday things and history etc. I had fun writing this and the words just kept coming, maybe a second poem is in the wind plenty of material. I am so glad you liked the sentiments and so much appreciate your review and comments. No fee to join lol Cheers Christine😀😀
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Wow joeruptak thank you so much for your fabulous rating and review for my poem written from being sick of being told what to do and say related to everyday things and history etc. I had fun writing this and the words just kept coming, maybe a second poem is in the wind plenty of material. I am so glad you liked the sentiments and so much appreciate your review and comments. No fee to join lol Cheers Christine😀😀
Comment from BeasPeas
A "right-on" poem of common sense. Thank you for writing and I hope you win the poem of the month contest. It's about time we drop all this nonsense and value each other without squelching our heritage, speech, holidays, etc. Marilyn/BeasPeas
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2015
A "right-on" poem of common sense. Thank you for writing and I hope you win the poem of the month contest. It's about time we drop all this nonsense and value each other without squelching our heritage, speech, holidays, etc. Marilyn/BeasPeas
Comment Written 25-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2015
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Thank you Marilyn for reading my poem and agreeing with its content. This Political Correctness is getting out of hand and treats us like idiots. So this is my reflection on the whole scene. Thanks you for your good wishes and I am just stoked to have had this even selected for this contest I was very surprised when I was notified of my selection. So once again I appreciate your lovely comments Cheers Christine
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Hi Christine. It got my vote. Good job and good luck in the contest. Marilyn/BeasPeas
Comment from Treischel
Very cleverly posed political and societal viewpoint that this sensitivity movement is getting out of hand. The problem is that you can't please everybody or things become absurd. I agree with your sentiment put together in aabb rhymed quatrains in a variable meter.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2015
Very cleverly posed political and societal viewpoint that this sensitivity movement is getting out of hand. The problem is that you can't please everybody or things become absurd. I agree with your sentiment put together in aabb rhymed quatrains in a variable meter.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2015
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Thank you Treischel for reading and giving this poem your review. Yes it is getting quite silly at times but I think as long as we remain aware of the absurd we can make our own choices. Just a bit of fun with this one too. with appreciation of your time Cjeers Christine😃
Comment from Cindy Warren
I agree. I live in Canada, and most of what you've said could apply here too. What if I'm offended by the nonsense? There are people who want to change the name of the Edmonton Eakimos! Seems they're harassing some other teams too. And Bugs Bunny carries a warning that some material may offend. Ridiculous! If someone doesn't like us the way we are, they're free to leave.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2015
I agree. I live in Canada, and most of what you've said could apply here too. What if I'm offended by the nonsense? There are people who want to change the name of the Edmonton Eakimos! Seems they're harassing some other teams too. And Bugs Bunny carries a warning that some material may offend. Ridiculous! If someone doesn't like us the way we are, they're free to leave.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2015
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Thanks Cindy for your reading ,and reviewing my poem. It appears PC is everywhere and doesn't it make you mad with what some people will come up with .haven't heard about Bugs Bunny yet ? But I'm sure I will . I appreciate you comments and maybe I will do a 2nd version their is enough material to write about. thanks again Cheers Chris😃
Comment from lalajovanoski
You are such an amazing poet! I truly enjoyed reading this as you are so very talented! Thank you so very much for sharing this as I truly enjoyed reading
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2015
You are such an amazing poet! I truly enjoyed reading this as you are so very talented! Thank you so very much for sharing this as I truly enjoyed reading
Comment Written 17-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2015
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thanks Lala, for your very lovely comments and I am glad you are enjoying my work as I am enjoying yours.It is great to be able to use poetry as a medium to share your thoughts with others. Thanks again Cheers Christine😄
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Wonderful! I think there is an honesty - and political incorrectness here - that is refreshing. Love the way you wrote this. Love the honesty. Just terrific.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2015
Wonderful! I think there is an honesty - and political incorrectness here - that is refreshing. Love the way you wrote this. Love the honesty. Just terrific.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2015
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Thanks Michael. I am glad you liked my poem and I call it as I see it as a rule. Thanks for you lovely review and generous rating I really appreciate your feedback Cheers Christine😀
Comment from ann marie mazz
hello chrissy
please allow me to let your words stand
there is nothing I could add or change
the words are clear
the entry read with ease
the delivery of rhyme was well done and not forced
this entry was well executed and composed
thank you for sharing your talent and message
all is well within in the entry
ann marie
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2015
hello chrissy
please allow me to let your words stand
there is nothing I could add or change
the words are clear
the entry read with ease
the delivery of rhyme was well done and not forced
this entry was well executed and composed
thank you for sharing your talent and message
all is well within in the entry
ann marie
Comment Written 17-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2015
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Thank you so much ann marie for you terrific review and kind words. I hope we can stop this PC before it gets out of hand but I think we might be a bit late. I enjoy writing poetry and found so much material for this one. Cheers Christine😄