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Christine's Poems

Viewing comments for Chapter 108 "A great one liner"
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Comment from Bill Schott
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With this line you have entered this contest and used its theme to create what might be the monostich that people like. Nice job.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 13-Jun-2015
    Thanks Bill, couldn't see any other line to fit the bill, and it was a bit of fun to do Cheers Christine😀
Comment from Pen of Fire
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The picture tells it all. I found it too difficult a subject to enter. You did a great job. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 13-Jun-2015
    Thank you pen of fire i thought i would have a go and yes it is a difficult style to think up and that was the best Icould cone up . A bit of fun the image also helped . Thns for stopping by Cheers Christine😀
Comment from danpald
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How to come and say it all
The contest did imply
That one line should day with care
All that is said with time

One line that fits the comics mode
That is the test of rhyme
Here to be just one line fair
That must be good inside

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 13-Jun-2015
    Thank you danpald as always I enjoy your responses to my work .glad you stopped by and had a look one time. Cheers Christine😀
Comment from rspoet
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It must have been great, how else could it have gotten such a reaction.
Excellent art work to match the one line
This review is a three liner.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 13-Jun-2015
    thanks rspoet. Couldn't think of much else but this just popped out and I thought the art work matched. We are lucky to have some great choices . Having a bit of fun anyway. Appreciate your review and comments Cheers Christine😀
Comment from sweetwoodjax
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this is a cute write, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this one liner about being the best one liner, I enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 13-Jun-2015
    Thanks sweetwoodjax. Just my weird sense of humour it just seemed to be the one line choice hope it worked. Thanks for the comments and good wishes Cheers Christine😄
Comment from Michael Wahl
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Ocean liner? Eye liner? Well, probably not, since there's more than one of each. Oh well, I guess that's NOT the one liner. Good job with the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 13-Jun-2015
    Thanks Michael Wahl got to be in it to win it ha ha Appreciate your review Cheers Christine
Comment from bayforesthimankush
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An image is thousands of words. This one liner blends with the background image; one liner expresses thousands and may be millions of words when read looking to the image attached.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 13-Jun-2015
    Thanks bayforesthimankush for you review and comments Just a bit of fun ha ha Cheers Christine
Comment from lancellot
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Hmm, I statement and a play on words that tell exactly what this should be, so there is absolutely no confusion. The voters can't say that it isn't. Smart.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 13-Jun-2015
    thank you Lancelot can't do much with one line or can you? Ha ha .enjoyed the challenge appreciate your time and comments Cheers Christine