Dr. Howler's Nightmares
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Devil Spawn"A collection of most unusual bedtime stories
26 total reviews
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Yup, pretty scary but still an interesting story. I enjoyed every bit of it. That Sisyphus punishment is the worst: "The Devil roared in laughter and warned me, "Forever you must shadow the demon you loosed on the Earth, always protecting him, and never, ever allowing any harm to come to him. Should you fail you will be fed to the gnashing, swirling demons around you. Suffering their same fate!"
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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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Yup, pretty scary but still an interesting story. I enjoyed every bit of it. That Sisyphus punishment is the worst: "The Devil roared in laughter and warned me, "Forever you must shadow the demon you loosed on the Earth, always protecting him, and never, ever allowing any harm to come to him. Should you fail you will be fed to the gnashing, swirling demons around you. Suffering their same fate!"
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Comment Written 16-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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Glad you enjoyed this tale. Appreciate the review.
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent horror story, absolutely unique, the marvels of imagination are running their unstoppable motor. I have never seen anything like this one my friend, the eternal notion of everlasting punishment fit really well, you've done a great job with this one Brett, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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This is an excellent horror story, absolutely unique, the marvels of imagination are running their unstoppable motor. I have never seen anything like this one my friend, the eternal notion of everlasting punishment fit really well, you've done a great job with this one Brett, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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Always appreciate your insightful comments and reviews. Glad you enjoyed.
Comment from Lobber
Hi there,
I like the way you open your story. The idea of having )baby teeth( takes on a whole new meaning. ...so does tongue-in-cheek. Like the image o
- Lobber
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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Hi there,
I like the way you open your story. The idea of having )baby teeth( takes on a whole new meaning. ...so does tongue-in-cheek. Like the image o
- Lobber
Comment Written 18-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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Glad you enjoyed. Much appreciate the review.
Comment from Justin Chopin
Great job Bret. Your story stylistically reminded me Tales from the Crypt because of the humor and the sheer terror that you put into this tale. Was very entertained and invested with your insidious infant and your reporter's time in Hell with the devil. Well done.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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Great job Bret. Your story stylistically reminded me Tales from the Crypt because of the humor and the sheer terror that you put into this tale. Was very entertained and invested with your insidious infant and your reporter's time in Hell with the devil. Well done.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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Glad you enjoyed. Appreciate your insights and the review.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, I don't know how many little kiddies would sleep after reading this as a bedtime story, as there are some pretty intense visions created for even an old dude like me. But it's fun. Thanks for sharing. Wish I had a six.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Well, I don't know how many little kiddies would sleep after reading this as a bedtime story, as there are some pretty intense visions created for even an old dude like me. But it's fun. Thanks for sharing. Wish I had a six.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Glad you enjoyed this little Nightmare. Your insights much appreciated. Perhaps will post more of them.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Being a first grade teacher I am pretty positive this should not be read to or told to young children. I did, however enjoy reading it. You told a very convincing nightmare. Thank you for re-posting.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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Being a first grade teacher I am pretty positive this should not be read to or told to young children. I did, however enjoy reading it. You told a very convincing nightmare. Thank you for re-posting.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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Glad you enjoyed. Much appreciate your review and comments.
Comment from Bill Schott
This delightful children's tale, Devil Spawn, would make me want to drink COFFINated beverages to stay awake. That's one mean baby, a worst afterlife occupation.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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This delightful children's tale, Devil Spawn, would make me want to drink COFFINated beverages to stay awake. That's one mean baby, a worst afterlife occupation.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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Liked the Coffee. Glad you enjoyed this little tale. Your insights and review appreciated.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Brett, it's not exactly what I would call a night story for small kids.LOL. I think it would leave them with pretty bad nightmares. I loved the story. It's well written. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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Hi Brett, it's not exactly what I would call a night story for small kids.LOL. I think it would leave them with pretty bad nightmares. I loved the story. It's well written. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 14-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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Glad you enjoyed this posting. Your reviews are always so insightful and much appreciated.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Well, not exactly the 'harmless little bedtime story' told to kids to 'teach' a lesson here, Brett - LOL! Definitely one for the Cryptkeeper late on a Saturday night! ;) Thanx for sharing, sir! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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Well, not exactly the 'harmless little bedtime story' told to kids to 'teach' a lesson here, Brett - LOL! Definitely one for the Cryptkeeper late on a Saturday night! ;) Thanx for sharing, sir! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 14-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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Glad you enjoyed this little tale. Your insights and reviews always appreciated.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I enjoyed reading your horror tale, you did a great job creating an interesting character and a suspenseful plot. I am not an expert story writer but I don't find anything wrong with the story . Good job!
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2015
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I enjoyed reading your horror tale, you did a great job creating an interesting character and a suspenseful plot. I am not an expert story writer but I don't find anything wrong with the story . Good job!
Comment Written 01-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2015
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Thanks for your comments an support as always.
