Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

With a few tweaks here and there, this would have made a great entry into one of those, "all dialogue" contests or the single sided phone conversation contest.

Irregardless, I thought this was well written, comical, and genuine.

Good stuff... John

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2015

Although the existence of those contests is news to me, I feel like a winner already, after reading your review. Thanks for the compliments.
I appreciate the stars.
Thank you.
Marv

Comment from Jay Squires

Excellent

Very effective, very funny and entertaining. I was getting all ready to complain when I saw a whole page of tag-less dialogue, but was surprised I followed it with no problem. You are very good with dialogue, by the way.

I'll be sure to call you." [Bring up to previous line.]

"If you are still experiencing difficulty, please do not hang up." [This seemed an odd thing for her to say after her previous response.]

Good job, Marvin.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2015

Many thanks, Jay.
I have many things to be thankful for: your opinions, your reviews, your honesty, your compliments, the stars you've given me and some measure of God-given ability.
I agree with you about the ?. . . do not hang up.? line. I think Abigail might have feared she would lose the caller.
Marvin