2015 Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Haiku (keep you in my hand)"A collection of haiku I wrote in 2015
26 total reviews
Comment from zanya
A delightful expression here in this Haiku Ladybug of a special and 'delicate' moment of interaction between us humans and Mother Nature in all Her Glory and diversity
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2015
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A delightful expression here in this Haiku Ladybug of a special and 'delicate' moment of interaction between us humans and Mother Nature in all Her Glory and diversity
Comment Written 14-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2015
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Thank you :) I appreciate your review and kind words.
Comment from Amy Greta
This brought back childhood memories, as I liked the ladybug's tickle as well. It's interesting how kids are generally not scared or annoyed by ladybugs, but any other insect would either create a scare or a slap or stomp. Very cute poem and one that can be enjoyed by both children and adults.
~Amy
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2015
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This brought back childhood memories, as I liked the ladybug's tickle as well. It's interesting how kids are generally not scared or annoyed by ladybugs, but any other insect would either create a scare or a slap or stomp. Very cute poem and one that can be enjoyed by both children and adults.
~Amy
Comment Written 13-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2015
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Thank you Amy, you are very kind.
Comment from Pancho Kid
This, given the subject, is the coolest haiku I've come across so far. Marvelous. Reminds me of an old girlfriend!
Pancho Kid
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2015
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This, given the subject, is the coolest haiku I've come across so far. Marvelous. Reminds me of an old girlfriend!
Pancho Kid
Comment Written 13-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2015
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Thank you so much! I appreciate the 6 stars review and the kind words.
Comment from sgalletti
Hi Gypsy! Yes, I've had this experience before. Isn't it fun when they land in your hand or on your finger? They do tickle. It's a stretch to grammatically connect your first two lines, as they should be (e.g. read them on one line as a phrase or sentence), but I do like the inference of the poem. Best of luck in the contest. Sue
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2015
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Hi Gypsy! Yes, I've had this experience before. Isn't it fun when they land in your hand or on your finger? They do tickle. It's a stretch to grammatically connect your first two lines, as they should be (e.g. read them on one line as a phrase or sentence), but I do like the inference of the poem. Best of luck in the contest. Sue
Comment Written 12-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2015
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thank you for your excellent review
Comment from Andrewajgblue
I think this is a lovely little haiku, it's so endearing, it reminded me of been a small child and yes, that's what we do isn't it , let them run around on our hand, good luck in the contest,
Andrew
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2015
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I think this is a lovely little haiku, it's so endearing, it reminded me of been a small child and yes, that's what we do isn't it , let them run around on our hand, good luck in the contest,
Andrew
Comment Written 12-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2015
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thank you for your excellent review and kind words
Comment from Michael Wahl
Your poem certainly meets the contest requirements, but the visual effects seem especially good to me. I guess you don't have to be a little girl for this to happen either, as I routinely get my arm tickled by Ladybugs when I'm in my garden.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2015
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Your poem certainly meets the contest requirements, but the visual effects seem especially good to me. I guess you don't have to be a little girl for this to happen either, as I routinely get my arm tickled by Ladybugs when I'm in my garden.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2015
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Thank you for the excellent review and for your kind words.
Comment from Bill Schott
This haiku, Keep You In My Hand, describes the scene of the picture that you've used well. I know these guys do tickle when they walk across you. It's when they're on your neck and back that they are a bother.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2015
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This haiku, Keep You In My Hand, describes the scene of the picture that you've used well. I know these guys do tickle when they walk across you. It's when they're on your neck and back that they are a bother.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2015
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Thank you for the excellent review and for your kind words.
Comment from IndianaIrish
I enjoyed your haiku, Gypsy. You have the two concrete images of a hand and the ladybug. May I suggest you remove the word 'and' in the second line? I honestly don't think it's needed and it would make the line flow better. Just a suggestion. Best wishes in the contest.
Smiles,
Indy :-)
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2015
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I enjoyed your haiku, Gypsy. You have the two concrete images of a hand and the ladybug. May I suggest you remove the word 'and' in the second line? I honestly don't think it's needed and it would make the line flow better. Just a suggestion. Best wishes in the contest.
Smiles,
Indy :-)
Comment Written 12-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2015
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Thank you for the excellent review and for your kind words.
Comment from Dean Kuch
They're the cutest of the cute, as least it it pertains to the insect world I think, Gypsy. The complete antithesis of centipedes, spiders and scorpions. I owned a Cobalt Blue tarantula once named Damien. He tickled when I held him in my hand too.
Great little insect haiku you've created here for the contest. I hope you do really well in the contest with this one!
~Dean :}
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2015
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They're the cutest of the cute, as least it it pertains to the insect world I think, Gypsy. The complete antithesis of centipedes, spiders and scorpions. I owned a Cobalt Blue tarantula once named Damien. He tickled when I held him in my hand too.
Great little insect haiku you've created here for the contest. I hope you do really well in the contest with this one!
~Dean :}
Comment Written 12-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2015
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Thank you for the excellent review Dean, and for your kind words. Heheheh, owning a tarantula, fits you well. :)
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You're welcome, Gypsy, lol. I was just a young lad at the time. Mom killed it 'cause he got out of his terrarium. It took an entire can of RAID bug spray to do it.
RIP, Damien... :)
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heheheh, poor Damien :)
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Yeah, and poor mom, too. She's terrified of itsy-bitsy spiders, much less a bright blue one as big as your hand, LOL.... :D
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You must had been a hand full as a child. :)
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I still am, heh-heh... :}
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I could do this all night, you crack me up. LOL
Comment from l.raven
HI Gypsy, I remember doing that too...now they have a beetle that looks like a lady bug...and it stings when you touch it...sigh...I love you poem...and a beautiful picture...luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2015
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HI Gypsy, I remember doing that too...now they have a beetle that looks like a lady bug...and it stings when you touch it...sigh...I love you poem...and a beautiful picture...luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 11-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2015
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Hello Linda, thank you for the review and kind words.
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you are so very welcome...always...xxoo luff