Act of Endurance
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Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent. You sure say a mouthful in your poems. I always read them over a couple of times to get the full meaning. It is extremely well written. Great job.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2016
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Excellent. You sure say a mouthful in your poems. I always read them over a couple of times to get the full meaning. It is extremely well written. Great job.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2016
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Glad some aspects of this write was found pleasing to you. The ideal behind project was a story: them detailing aspects of endurance. Thanking you for generous rate and touching thoughts.
Comment from djeckert
a lot of very interesting and compelling points. certainly a good diatribe on a LOT of the questions for humanity.
Ill have to read it a few more times to truly get it. Something I appreciate and enjoy. I like the mirror image aspect ,I will explore it further. Thanks and God Bless
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2016
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a lot of very interesting and compelling points. certainly a good diatribe on a LOT of the questions for humanity.
Ill have to read it a few more times to truly get it. Something I appreciate and enjoy. I like the mirror image aspect ,I will explore it further. Thanks and God Bless
Comment Written 13-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2016
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Yeah replies back states these same aspects about reading it again: I myself captured by "Haunted House" the thought of seeing myself as teen and as child detailing my reactions in both time occurrence. Thanking you for generous rate and encouraging statements.
Comment from Ricky1024
"All very true and well written."
"A wake up call all gift packaged for an Early Christmas Present as we all die!"
LOL!
Ricky 1024.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2015
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"All very true and well written."
"A wake up call all gift packaged for an Early Christmas Present as we all die!"
LOL!
Ricky 1024.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2015
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Glad this write pleased. Thanking you for generous rate and bang of a response filled my day.
Comment from Joyce Long
You have some very interesting and provoking ideas listed in your poem. I had to look back to see if it was a poem or a story as your sentences read like a story. You need to change your poetry writing style come to appear more like poetry.
I didn't see any errors or corrections to be made.
Thanks for sharing.
Joyce 11-13-15
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2015
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You have some very interesting and provoking ideas listed in your poem. I had to look back to see if it was a poem or a story as your sentences read like a story. You need to change your poetry writing style come to appear more like poetry.
I didn't see any errors or corrections to be made.
Thanks for sharing.
Joyce 11-13-15
Comment Written 13-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2015
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Yes you are probably right about these notes as poetry: but what exactly is poetry but written conveyance. A thought indeed for me to ponder. Glad at least you enjoyed the read poetic or poised in thought. Thanking you for generous rate and welcomed insights about this write.
Comment from petalangela
Pertinent words of life
We seek but few actually find
The wording is clear the message I'd valuable
the poet is seeking
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2015
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Pertinent words of life
We seek but few actually find
The wording is clear the message I'd valuable
the poet is seeking
Comment Written 07-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2015
Yes indeed a long ways from home, but searching daily for path to return, no big push to leave, just miss home Thanking you for generous rate and assurances plus insight
Comment from JourneyHolm
Wow, this was a very cool poem and style of poetry. I thought you did a good job and even thought the reverse was better than the former. At first, I was curious about the whole format you used, but halfway through it obviously made sense. Good job. Keep up the good work!
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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2015
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Wow, this was a very cool poem and style of poetry. I thought you did a good job and even thought the reverse was better than the former. At first, I was curious about the whole format you used, but halfway through it obviously made sense. Good job. Keep up the good work!
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Comment Written 07-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2015
Had to punch this one a little to smooth some lumps, and you are right the latter brought home the cherished ideal, a start of uncertainty and then a proud stroll Thanking you for very generous rate with delightful feelings expressed
