Get Well, Brooke!
Viewing comments for Chapter 10021 "Number Please/Ten Phone Calls"Writing for Brooke
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Comment from pharp
Jan,
You are indeed a very talented poet. This is yet another beautifully penned poem, I really enjoy reading the counting poems. Its amazing how you come up with the different subjects and how well they rhyme with excellent rhythm as well. Thanks for sharing. lol Portia
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2015
Jan,
You are indeed a very talented poet. This is yet another beautifully penned poem, I really enjoy reading the counting poems. Its amazing how you come up with the different subjects and how well they rhyme with excellent rhythm as well. Thanks for sharing. lol Portia
Comment Written 04-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2015
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Thank you so much. I really appreciate your time reading and reviewing my poem. Your support is great. Jan
Comment from Bill Schott
My neighbor still used a crank phone when I was a kid. You could direct dial though, by cranking each of the five numbers out separately. There were still party lines so any a dozen people may have been listening.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2015
My neighbor still used a crank phone when I was a kid. You could direct dial though, by cranking each of the five numbers out separately. There were still party lines so any a dozen people may have been listening.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2015
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Thank you so much for reviewing my poem. I really appreciate it. Jan
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Nice poem! I like the count down poems, I see them a lot. Are they Brooke's favorites?
The poem rhymed well. The lines flowed nicely. I like the format and the picture that complements the story.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2015
Nice poem! I like the count down poems, I see them a lot. Are they Brooke's favorites?
The poem rhymed well. The lines flowed nicely. I like the format and the picture that complements the story.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2015
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Thank you for the review. Brooke did write many countdown poems. It is a format she likes. Jan
Comment from cbat
I enjoyed this very much.
You take me back to earlier times.
Some of these times seem to already be forgotten.
Please continue, I get inspiration from you.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2015
I enjoyed this very much.
You take me back to earlier times.
Some of these times seem to already be forgotten.
Please continue, I get inspiration from you.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2015
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Thank you for your time reviewing. I enjoyed writing the poem. I appreciate your time reading. Jan
Comment from emkoutny
I've seen them movies. Remember calling the operator and getting a live person to talk to, who actually knew things and would answer questions? Wouldn't it be great if we could call our loved ones in heaven? I would love to talk to my grandmothers again. Just a thought.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2015
I've seen them movies. Remember calling the operator and getting a live person to talk to, who actually knew things and would answer questions? Wouldn't it be great if we could call our loved ones in heaven? I would love to talk to my grandmothers again. Just a thought.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2015
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You are so right. I would love to talk to my grandmother again. Thanks for your time reading & reviewing. Jan
Comment from Jackarrie
This is a quite imaginative poem using the number theme to countdown. I do remember the telephone switch board as a child that is what I wanted to do
I am sure Brooke will laugh at this one.
Mary
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2015
This is a quite imaginative poem using the number theme to countdown. I do remember the telephone switch board as a child that is what I wanted to do
I am sure Brooke will laugh at this one.
Mary
Comment Written 03-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2015
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Thank you. I really appreciate the review and your time. Jan
Comment from justafan
Very well done JP...This is something to be very proud of. I just loved it. It made me smile and I am sure it will make Ms. Brooke smile as well.
Always justafan,
Missy
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2015
Very well done JP...This is something to be very proud of. I just loved it. It made me smile and I am sure it will make Ms. Brooke smile as well.
Always justafan,
Missy
Comment Written 03-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2015
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Thank you so much. I appreciate your support. My mother worked for a short time as a switchboard operator. I know there are many "out there." Thank you for your time. Jan