Beautiful Death
Viewing comments for Chapter 10010 "Bad omen"from birth I have longed for death
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Good job! It doesn't rhyme in all the lines-free verse, the format is clear and easy to read, the character is well developed, the background color is nice and it complements the poem.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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Good job! It doesn't rhyme in all the lines-free verse, the format is clear and easy to read, the character is well developed, the background color is nice and it complements the poem.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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hank you!
Is it incorrect not to rhyme? I was a little bugged with it.
I worry about my girls and some of these times, all I can do is Fan Story.
I keep picking your brains.
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No, of course not! it is perfectly fine not to rhyme, that is what free verse means, it is a type of poem that doesn't rhyme. Your poem is perfect the way it is.
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I have gained so much, knowing people like you.
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Any time you have a question you can ask me. :)
take care sweetie.
Comment from JourneyHolm
Interesting poem. I was a little thrown off by the last couplet. Overall, though, I think this sums up the "face-palm" aspects of a child and the frustrated "wisdom" of an adult. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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Interesting poem. I was a little thrown off by the last couplet. Overall, though, I think this sums up the "face-palm" aspects of a child and the frustrated "wisdom" of an adult. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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Thank you!
I will look at the Last couplet.