Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

Great poem about the humble dandelion I am so taken back with the never ending descriptions that are being written. Another lovely poem added to the book for Brooke. Well done. Mary

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015

Thank you. I appreciate your review and kind comments. Jan

Comment from pharp

Excellent

Beautifully penned, you make it seems so easy. Love the artwork chosen for this lovely poem. Another great Triolet poem in honor of our dear sweet Brooke. Excellent job my friend, thanks for sharing Pharp

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015

Thank you. I appreciate everything you said. Jan

Comment from MissMerri

Excellent

A very nice triolet, and such an appropriate tribute to the poet who does them often... and often speaks of dandelions too. She will love this, I know. I did.

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015

Thank you for your kind words and review. Always appreciated. Jan

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

An excellent triolet, jannypan, and an excellent choice as that is a form Brooke frequently uses. Great repeating line with "Dandelions grow wild and free." I like your "feathery wisps" description. Nice sound with "feathery wisps flee." Brooke will enjoy. judi

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015

Thank you so much. It is always a joy to here from you. You are so positive. Jan

reply by judiverse on 02-Jun-2015

You're very welcome, janny. What sweet comments from you! judi

Comment from cbat

Excellent

Beautiful, and simple.

I enjoy your writing, and you always have great art picks.

Keep writing, I will keep reading.

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015

I appreciate you so much. You are always so positive. Thank you for the review and kind words, Jan

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Good job! I like your triolet. It follows the format, it flows well, I love the picture and the colors of font and background,

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015

I really appreciate your review. Thank you. Jan

Comment from emkoutny

Excellent

Nice job again Jannypan! I like the choices that you made as far as the picture, background and script color. The poem works well to show the freedom and beauty of dandelions. I guess the haiku contest got you fired up about the topic!

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015

Thank you so much. I appreciate your time reading/reviewing my poem.