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Get Well, Brooke!

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Writing for Brooke

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Comment from Louise Michelle
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This is a lovely tribute to our beloved Brooke. I just found out she'll be moving to California. At least she'll be close to her beloved grandson, Sawyer. I really do think God works in mysterious ways... Hugs, Lou

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 06-Jul-2015
    Hi Lou, yes He does...I am sure Miranda will be glad to have her mother with her...they are close...what happened is truly so sad....I hope and pray one day she will return...thank you so much Lou...luff Linda xxoo
Comment from Just2Write
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Another sweet tribute to Brooke. I'm sure she will love it. Brooke has shared so much of her joys and wonders of the world with us, and each of us that know her feels a special connection.
S9L3 - Your always on my mind (You're)
Rose.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 06-Jul-2015
    thank you for your help Rose...she really has been so helpful to so many on here...and with a smile...I truly how you're feeling better...thank you sweet lady...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from lakeport
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We miss you, indeed I always enjoyed reviewing with pleasure your daily poem.
I hope you are OK and soon be posting again, God bless you. Hugs! Lakeport.

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 01-Jul-2015
    Hi Erich, I am...been very busy...just came from Texas to Illinois...and am going to Florida tomorrow...and then back in two weeks to Illinois...and then back to Texas...thank you for caring Erich...and going back and reading my poem...God Bless you too...luff Linda xxoo
reply by lakeport on 01-Jul-2015
    you are very welcome, Hugs! lakeport,.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2015
    smiling back at ya...xxoo
reply by lakeport on 01-Jul-2015
    thank you very much, Hugs! Lakeport.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2015
    your so welcome very much...xxoo
reply by lakeport on 02-Jul-2015
    thank you very much, Hugs! Lakeport.
Comment from amanda98653
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This is a very beautiful poem, Linda.

"it didn't take you long
waited for my teacher, to tell me what was wrong

my writing not so perfect, you helped me all you could
corrected all my silly mistakes" --Brooke was always there when we needed her help. Her care and concern were unconditional.

Love these verses:

"you took a weed
you posted on Fanstory

and through your words, made me see
a Dandelion
and all its beautiful glory"

Everything has beauty but not everyone sees it. Brooke and you do :)

I love this poem a lot, Linda. It is heartfelt and captivating.

Big hugs :)

Amanda

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 21-Jun-2015
    Oh Amanda, thank you so very much for going back and reading my poem...I am so glad you like it....I wish Brooke would get back soon...I sure do miss her...and Maureen...so many have gone...I am so glad you are back...you make me smile...and boy can you every write...a true talent...thank you so much for all your wonderful stars...and a wonderful review...bigger hugs back...Luff Linda xxoo luff
reply by amanda98653 on 23-Jun-2015
    You're welcome, Linda :)

    I hope you're enjoying your trip.

    Amanda
Comment from w.j.debi
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Brooke should love this tribute. I hope we hear some good news soon. As you point out, she is an amazing teacher, has let us share her love for dandelions, and has let us watch Sawyer grow up through her poetry and Miranda's pictures.

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 03-Jun-2015
    thank you so very much Debi...I am so glad you like it...I wish she would come back soon...she truly did teach us so much...Luff Linda xxoo
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reply by w.j.debi on 03-Jun-2015
    She certainly did teach a lot, and so graciously. I had just started a class with her and even though we only met twice, I learned a lot about free verse in a short amount of time. We only talked about it and I was supposed to come with some ideas for some possible poems for the nest time. At any rate, I hope she gets to come back and share some more of her lovely work, it was always so perfect and such a good model to follow.
reply by w.j.debi on 03-Jun-2015
    She certainly did teach a lot, and so graciously. I had just started a class with her and even though we only met twice, I learned a lot about free verse in a short amount of time. We only talked about it and I was supposed to come with some ideas for some possible poems for the nest time. At any rate, I hope she gets to come back and share some more of her lovely work, it was always so perfect and such a good model to follow.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2015
    I am so sorry you didn't get t finish...she will be back soon...I hope and pray...luff..xxoo
Comment from Deniz22
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Beautiful...I just posted one for Brooke, but I didn't get it in the book. I thought you started one and even went to your page but I missed this somehow. Not trying to upstage you, I'm just dumb! :) God bless you, Dennis

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 03-Jun-2015
    Hi Dennis, been missing you...I got behind on my replies...just caught up half of them today...and no you are not dumb...I just went to someone's poem they had written for Brooke...it says book on their site...and I clicked on it...put me right to the writing page...my first time...and you upstage me any time you want...LOL...thank you for a great review you...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from gallivandog
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I remember Brooke now......... she helped me out quite a bit a few years ago, Isn't it a blessing that there are people like her around to encourage and give her time to help others flourish.
Your poem shows the respect that you have for her and highlights some memarable moments that have clearly stuck in your mind, even I remember Sawyer. I hope that she has a speedy recovery.
I enjoyed reading this Well done you.
Regards
Dave
S.Wales

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 03-Jun-2015
    HI Dave, so good to see you...thank you so very much for a great review....she would help everyone she could...sigh...I just pray for her...thank you...you...luff Linda xxoo
Comment from Healing
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Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful. How beautiful is this poem. For such a beautiful and talented person. Thank you so much for sharing. Brooke was the first person to ever review my work when I joined Fanstory and I always looked forward to her reviews as she steered me in the right direction with her amazing talent.

Ky

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
    WOW!!! smiling big...thank you so very much for a wonderful review...and your wonderful stars...she has taught so many so much on here...how to love life...and see nature in all it's beauty...I to love her replies and her reviews...miss her so much...thank you Ky...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from amahra
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This was so tenderly writing and so well thought out. I loved the glittering art work you so carefully chose for this tribute to Brooke. I miss her very much and pray for her well return. Blessings to you, my dear.

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
    HI Sweet Lady, thank you for a wonderful review...I hope and pray she will come back to us real soon...Blessing to you too...God Bless..Linda xxoo
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hi L.raven Oh, how you made me smile with your sincere comments about Brooke
When you said-

forgotten you're not
by loved ones and friends
by memories you left behind

Gert

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
    Hi Gert, so good to see you...I am so glad you like it...I miss her...wish she would find her way back...thank you so very much...Luff Linda xxoo
reply by Gert sherwood on 02-Jun-2015
    You are welcome Linda
    I found out a few days ago Brooke is ill
    what is wrong?

    Gert
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2015
    Miranda said she was acting strange...when they got to her she had to go in the hospital...she has an aggressive stage of MS...I am just praying Gert they can get it under control...I so miss her...she is such a wonderful person...go on the form...Look under Gennerl...Miranda has posted some updates on there...God Bless...Linda
reply by Gert sherwood on 03-Jun-2015
    Hi Linda must be looking in the wrong place cannot find Gennerl

    Gert