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Beautiful Death

Viewing comments for Chapter 10032 " building a multi million $ company "
from birth I have longed for death

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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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good job cbat! I thought it was a funny short story, or list of all the things big corporations do to get ahead and make money. Very clever!

 Comment Written 30-May-2015


reply by the author on 31-May-2015
    Thank you!

    This one gave me nightmares.
Comment from tfawcus
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An amusing satire which could well be developed. There are many who put the almighty dollar before family and friends and few that are the happier for it.

 Comment Written 30-May-2015


reply by the author on 30-May-2015
    Thank you!
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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I really love the short and powerful method of telling the story. It packs more of a punch, and it's short enough that people will take the time to read it, or at least, that's what I have found with my stories. If I make them too long, less people will read it. I, of course, love it either way.
Rhonda

 Comment Written 30-May-2015


reply by the author on 30-May-2015
    Thank you again.