Get Well, Brooke!
Viewing comments for Chapter 40 "Get Well, Dear Brooke"Writing for Brooke
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Comment from Liz O'Neill
They won't let me leave a link. If I could, I would leave a link for Grace VanderWaal singing Florets.
It is beautiful. She's suggesting we be like florets. I hope you can find it.
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now your story: I like how you use personification. This will draw the reader in. This is good because it lets us know to pray or sending healing energy.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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They won't let me leave a link. If I could, I would leave a link for Grace VanderWaal singing Florets.
It is beautiful. She's suggesting we be like florets. I hope you can find it.
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now your story: I like how you use personification. This will draw the reader in. This is good because it lets us know to pray or sending healing energy.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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Thank you, Liz. You pulled this one out of my archive for dear Brooke.
I appreciate it very much.
John
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***My pleasure***
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi John,
like I said, I read this brilliance earlier, but couldn't review until now... hey, and now on reading this again, and then aloud to my wife Jade, we both needed something to wipe away the tears from such a cute and heartfelt write... yeah, even the poetry you think you can't write, but so obviously can hit the mark or should I say, the heart.
Like I've said a million time previously... you rock this style of writing, there is such and innocent-child-like quality... and not saying it was written by a child, more a very sensitive and clever wordsmith, that can do nothing but melt the most frozen amongst us with his intent... never doubt who you are as a writer... I don't!
A very beautiful and creative 'Get Well Brooke' treat, and a true healing of the soul, Brother... uniquely you!
With our thoughts we create,
the magic of healing,
James.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2015
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Hi John,
like I said, I read this brilliance earlier, but couldn't review until now... hey, and now on reading this again, and then aloud to my wife Jade, we both needed something to wipe away the tears from such a cute and heartfelt write... yeah, even the poetry you think you can't write, but so obviously can hit the mark or should I say, the heart.
Like I've said a million time previously... you rock this style of writing, there is such and innocent-child-like quality... and not saying it was written by a child, more a very sensitive and clever wordsmith, that can do nothing but melt the most frozen amongst us with his intent... never doubt who you are as a writer... I don't!
A very beautiful and creative 'Get Well Brooke' treat, and a true healing of the soul, Brother... uniquely you!
With our thoughts we create,
the magic of healing,
James.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2015
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Whoa... Back-to-back reviews! You're going to make my head swell!
Thank you, my brother for the six stars. Always appreciayed. John
Comment from judester
A poem with a poem. This is heartwarming, original and sweet. I'm sure this will make her smile. I am so impressed with all the writers bringing their unique style in one common prompt, to send warm wishes and healing thoughts to such a wonderful woman, bravo you, judester
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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A poem with a poem. This is heartwarming, original and sweet. I'm sure this will make her smile. I am so impressed with all the writers bringing their unique style in one common prompt, to send warm wishes and healing thoughts to such a wonderful woman, bravo you, judester
Comment Written 02-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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Thank you very much for reading and the kind words. John
Comment from mermaids
Love this conversation between Mango and Bert. It is comforting, I am an animal lover the image of the two canines is wonderful. Love the poem about the dandelions, like Brooke, I love those beautiful flowers.....um weeds. Your words show love for our beloved poet.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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Love this conversation between Mango and Bert. It is comforting, I am an animal lover the image of the two canines is wonderful. Love the poem about the dandelions, like Brooke, I love those beautiful flowers.....um weeds. Your words show love for our beloved poet.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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Thank you got that kind review. Always appreciated.
John
Comment from Healing
What a truly touching and heart felt piece for such a wonderful and beautiful soul. All prayers are with Brooke. An amazing piece of work. Thank you so much for sharing your talent.
Ky
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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What a truly touching and heart felt piece for such a wonderful and beautiful soul. All prayers are with Brooke. An amazing piece of work. Thank you so much for sharing your talent.
Ky
Comment Written 01-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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Thank you for reading this story for Brooke , John
Comment from livelylinda
jmdge1954: oh, how sweet! I could picture the beagle and St. Bernard having this conversation. Brooke will so enjoy this story and poem. Well done! livelylinda
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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jmdge1954: oh, how sweet! I could picture the beagle and St. Bernard having this conversation. Brooke will so enjoy this story and poem. Well done! livelylinda
Comment Written 01-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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Thank you Linda. She's enjoyed my previous Mango and Bert stories. I thought it was the right thing. John
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
Dear John,
I think Brooke will be delighted with your story as well as the poem. I know I was. The comment about the comma after direct address to God really got me. Teardrop...
Great job,
Love, Carolyn
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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Dear John,
I think Brooke will be delighted with your story as well as the poem. I know I was. The comment about the comma after direct address to God really got me. Teardrop...
Great job,
Love, Carolyn
Comment Written 01-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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She nailed me countless times with that and I still mess it up! I'm glad you like and enjoyed it. John
Note: how've you been. Have seen or read your writing in a while?
Comment from Walu Feral
Hahahaha! G'day John, I know this is not a good time to laugh at a poem for our dear friend but she will laugh at this one to so I did. That is great stuff mate. Very clever, I love those two characters. Cheers and well done, Fez
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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Hahahaha! G'day John, I know this is not a good time to laugh at a poem for our dear friend but she will laugh at this one to so I did. That is great stuff mate. Very clever, I love those two characters. Cheers and well done, Fez
Comment Written 01-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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No offense taken, my friend. Thank you for reading and sharing. John
Comment from Delahay
A lot of people seem to be reminded of dandelions when they think of Brooke. I just found out yesterday why she had not been posting or reviewing lately. This is a thoughtful tribute to her.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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A lot of people seem to be reminded of dandelions when they think of Brooke. I just found out yesterday why she had not been posting or reviewing lately. This is a thoughtful tribute to her.
Comment Written 31-May-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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Thank you very much. John
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The author could have fooled me - I really liked her poem. The author's words are creative, thought provoking and descriptive. The artwork is perfect and reflects the theme of this poem. Brooke is so well loved -
with prayers and loving energy.
Thank you, harmony13
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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Excellent Poem! The author could have fooled me - I really liked her poem. The author's words are creative, thought provoking and descriptive. The artwork is perfect and reflects the theme of this poem. Brooke is so well loved -
with prayers and loving energy.
Thank you, harmony13
Comment Written 31-May-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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Thank you, harmony.
John