Comment from MissMerri

Excellent

You are so right! Her poems always are uplifting and inspiring and oh, how we miss them! This is a lovely triolet and I know Brooke will enjoy it. The picture too, is amazing. Beautifully done.

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015

Thanks so much for your lovely review and comments. Nancy

Comment from Aussie

Exceptional

You certainly put the situation into context. No Brooke, no song bird. Everyone that knows her is grieving, nothing to do but hope and pray for her. She is our mother that looks after our writing and in turn, excellent poet. Well done.

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015

Thanks so much, Kay for this lovely review and the 6 rating. I'm so glad you liked it. Nancy

Comment from Benny Beeharry

Excellent

We are all missing Brooke I suppose. Hope she will be all right and be back soon.
These are two most beautiful birds you have here, the thoughts are as beautiful.
Benny Beeharry

 Comment Written 31-May-2015

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reply by the author on 31-May-2015

Thanks so much for your thoughtful review. I'm glad you liked it. Nancy

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

A person's strength is seldom recognized until it is missing. Here hoping and praying Brooke will be back soon. Nancy, your poem is very well written with very good imagery.

 Comment Written 31-May-2015

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reply by the author on 31-May-2015

Thank you Charlie for your thoughtful review. Nancy

reply by c_lucas on 31-May-2015

You're welcome, Nancy. Charlie

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

I must admit, nancy the cute little birdies caught my eye right off. They are so perky and saucy. Beautiful layout with the colours and artwork.

Your triolet is written to perfection. Yes, we do miss Brooke so very much.

Beautifully composed in every way.

Gloria

 Comment Written 31-May-2015

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reply by the author on 31-May-2015

Thanks Gloria. Glad you liked the birds. Thanks for the great review. Nancy

Comment from Zue65

Excellent

Yes, we all hope that Brooke will soon be posting again her beautiful poems. I love the poem you have written for Brooke. I am sure she would love it too. God bless.

 Comment Written 31-May-2015

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reply by the author on 31-May-2015

Thank you for your kind thoughts and lovely review. Nancy

Comment from artisart4u

Excellent

I like your poem and repeating lines give the poem emphasis. Your poem also
rhymes well.

Through poetry you have lifted Brooke up, one can not say enough about a dear friend.

Good luck with your poem.

 Comment Written 30-May-2015

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reply by the author on 31-May-2015

Thank you for your thoughtful review. I'm glad you liked it. Nancy

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

A wonderfully written triolet, and a beautifully written ode to FanStory's own poet laureate, Brooke, nancyjam. You're absolutely right, her uplifting poetry and encouraging comments are sorely missed. If I got just one review for something I'd written, I could always count on Brooke to be the one providing it. Not so with anyone else.

Well done, Brooke should adore this...~Dean

 Comment Written 30-May-2015

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reply by the author on 30-May-2015

You're the second person today that thought I was jannypan (lol) does her name come up on my post somewhere?
Thanks for the great review in any case. Glad you liked it. nancy (nancyjam):)

reply by Dean Kuch on 30-May-2015

Hah, no, I just get a lot of her work in my inbox, nancyjam, and your user names are so close in spelling... A-h-h-h-h-h, the human mind and what we're often deceived into thinking we see.

I do apologize, nancyjam Great poem, though, whomever you are :)... ~Dean

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

Nancy, this is a lovely triolet. I love the comparison of Brooke to a songbird, for her voice reached us all with her good advice and fine examples, even if we didn't take her classes.

 Comment Written 30-May-2015

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reply by the author on 30-May-2015

Thanks so much Phyllis, for this beautiful review. Nancy

Comment from angelface2

Excellent

Very nice, Nancyjam. I sure do miss her and her poetry and the picture of Sawyer. Sure hope she recovers and can come back. Your triolet is very well written. Love it. :>D Miss Sally

 Comment Written 30-May-2015

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reply by the author on 30-May-2015

Thanks so much for your thoughtful comments. Nancy