Get Well, Brooke!
Viewing comments for Prologue "A heart-felt wish"Writing for Brooke
7 total reviews
Comment from TPAC
I feel writer statement is positive, seemingly hesitate during flow course, but clearly conveyed holding writer intents, I found the write refreshing in nature
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2015
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I feel writer statement is positive, seemingly hesitate during flow course, but clearly conveyed holding writer intents, I found the write refreshing in nature
Comment Written 22-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2015
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Thank you, TPAC for your review and comments.
Comment from Lulube
This is a very sincere gesture for Brooke to believe the power which you have come to know of, through the writings that are in this book. Great concept for this message to reach her.
good penning
lulube
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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This is a very sincere gesture for Brooke to believe the power which you have come to know of, through the writings that are in this book. Great concept for this message to reach her.
good penning
lulube
Comment Written 30-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Thanks Lulube
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welcome
lulube
Comment from Joy Graham
I believe in the power of prayer. I feel all the energy going straight to Brooke from all these poems and messages. She has touched our lives and it's our turn to return the favor. Your poem and message are lovely.
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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I believe in the power of prayer. I feel all the energy going straight to Brooke from all these poems and messages. She has touched our lives and it's our turn to return the favor. Your poem and message are lovely.
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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I am deeply honored by your kind words! I'm new, but I have read so many wonderful poems and prayers for her, that I know she is a great lady and poet! Thank you for your kind words and including my prayer for her!
Comment from Jean Lutz
Beautifully penned with great artwork, too. Keep those prayers ascending. May she soon be healed and writing and reviewing on site again.
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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Beautifully penned with great artwork, too. Keep those prayers ascending. May she soon be healed and writing and reviewing on site again.
Comment Written 28-May-2015
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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The artwork came from our trip to Ireland! Drumcliff. Thank you for the review Jean
Comment from Treischel
A wonderful tribute and heartfelt prayer for our site's much loved Brooke, aka, Adewpearl. Even though are new, it is wonderful that you share in outer prayers. Thank you so much for this well written abcb rhymed prayer/poem.
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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A wonderful tribute and heartfelt prayer for our site's much loved Brooke, aka, Adewpearl. Even though are new, it is wonderful that you share in outer prayers. Thank you so much for this well written abcb rhymed prayer/poem.
Comment Written 28-May-2015
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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I really appreciate the review, Treischel especially after reading yours
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements loosely - they might take issue with it being written about another person's body and not your own BUT since it is about Brooke the infamous committee might show some leniency (I pray so). This is a beautiful prayer and, like you, I have access to multiple prayer chains and have added her to each one. May God bless you in abundance for exhibiting the corporal virtue of prayer for the sick so beautifully. I wish you the best in the contest and thank you for sharing it.
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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This meets the contest requirements loosely - they might take issue with it being written about another person's body and not your own BUT since it is about Brooke the infamous committee might show some leniency (I pray so). This is a beautiful prayer and, like you, I have access to multiple prayer chains and have added her to each one. May God bless you in abundance for exhibiting the corporal virtue of prayer for the sick so beautifully. I wish you the best in the contest and thank you for sharing it.
Comment Written 28-May-2015
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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Mystic, how do I contact Tom to ask if he will include this poem in her book?
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Up at the top of the screen there is a 'Contact Us' link which will allow you to email him directly (he picks all of them up). Tell him you did not know how to add to Joy Graham's book for Brooke and could he do it for you or else it will cost you your second post of the day.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a nice prayer for Brooke ( add e to your poem in her name), I like the way your expressed the sentiments. The picture is perfect for your words. Good job. (You can have Tom add this to her book. Contact him giving him the name of your poem and desire to have it added to the "Get well, Brooke". Be sure to give him both names IF you decide to add this. Good job and thanks for sharing. No changes.
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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This is a nice prayer for Brooke ( add e to your poem in her name), I like the way your expressed the sentiments. The picture is perfect for your words. Good job. (You can have Tom add this to her book. Contact him giving him the name of your poem and desire to have it added to the "Get well, Brooke". Be sure to give him both names IF you decide to add this. Good job and thanks for sharing. No changes.
Comment Written 28-May-2015
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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Thanks jannypan, I heard from Tom and he included my poem to Brooke! Thanks ever so much for helping me!