Comment from mumsyone

Excellent

A beautiful field of dandelions to accompany your poetic tribute to Brooke. May she soon be well and picking dandelions again.
Lois

 Comment Written 30-May-2015

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Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Very Nice Dan
Just check out these two lines--

The poet lies now in the ((her)) bed

While the yellow flowers are in bud (bloom)--

question what kind of pie in the window?

 Comment Written 29-May-2015

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reply by the author on 29-May-2015

Whatever is your favorite. Open for your personal desire what pie you would smell in the window

reply by Gert sherwood on 29-May-2015

Fresh cherry Pie
Yum

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Terrific poem to Brooke, dan. And the photograph makes me feel like running through a field of dandelions.

You've got great meter, sound imagery and you have successfully ushered in two distinct smells, the barn and the new pie. I think I'll go with the pie if you don't mind.

Very nicely written, my friend.

Gloria

 Comment Written 28-May-2015

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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

This is an excellent presentation. I love the picture and your words are perfect. I love the last 2 lines the best

With the fairies in the fields
dancing among the daffodils

dancing with daffodils is great.

Good job and thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 28-May-2015

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Comment from Just2Write

Excellent

Awww, this is a sweet poem to Brooke and her beloved dandelions.
I think your poem got mis-numbered, and should be poem # 32.
Only you can edit that.
Rose.

 Comment Written 28-May-2015

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Thanks for the comments. I do not understand about the numbering, this is the first time I added to a book in process.

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

This is lovely and I know Brooke would enjoy it too. She is the only person that loved dandelions as much as I do. I miss her and pray she returns to us soon.

 Comment Written 28-May-2015

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Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

You made me hungry for pie LOL!!! I remember the days when pies would cool on the windowsill. I loved running free through the fields. Oh to be young again. Kids don't do that these days. Too many kooks out there. Ah the good old days and I think I turned out kind of okay :)

 Comment Written 28-May-2015

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Comment from judester

Excellent

I am loving this tribute to Brooke. Each writer bringing their unique style with one common goal, to wish this special woman well. I love your style. You have written broke instead of brooke twice, cheers judester

 Comment Written 28-May-2015

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reply by the author on 28-May-2015

Thanks for the correction OOPPSS!!!

reply by judester on 28-May-2015

I wrote brokke a couple times, hah cheers