Comment from bayforesthimankush

Excellent

Small yellow flowers bloom in many places again and again; it decorates the surrounding where it blooms. The sunshine gives the inspiration it needs to bloom everyday. Get well letter is like a yellow flower; it generates happiness to the sick one. The one who gives the get well acts like a sun.

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2015

---

reply by the author on 07-Jun-2015

Thanks for a thoughtful and encouraging review. Elaine

Comment from writeapoem

Good

I enjoyed this poem about the dandelion fairy. The poem was written with feeling, and a revealing description. The poem brought back memories in Grandmas yard as a boy. The little yellow flower that no neighbor wanted that popped up overnight and blanket the front yard. I remember after an early morning rain the the dandelion fairy had visited Grandmas yard another spring day. I thank you for the carefully chosen words to describe the effect of your dandelion fairy.

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2015

---

reply by the author on 07-Jun-2015

Thanks for your encouraging words. Elaine

Comment from Ginnygray

Excellent

Seven stanzas, five of which are three line stanzas! A four line stanza begins and a five line stanza ends the poem! No end rhyme! No definite form! Very descriptive! The second stanza is the only one with punctuation! My favorite stanza is the last one! The description of the dandelion fairy's gifts are beautiful! The wishes, light dreams, and finally concluding with the gifts of sunshine, nature's gold! Great poem!

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2015

---

reply by the author on 07-Jun-2015

Thanks for a thoughtful and encouraging review. Elaine

Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

What a beautiful presentation. You verse has such a joyful feeling to it. The fairy seems so happy to spread that joy. The picture of the dandelion field is so inspiring with those gorgeous yellow flowers. Brooke should love is.

 Comment Written 31-May-2015

---

reply by the author on 07-Jun-2015

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from Selina Stambi

Excellent

Lovely happy poem in free verse.

Dandelions always remind me of Brooke. So sad.

Hope you have a beautiful weekend, mermaids.

Love,

Sonali

 Comment Written 30-May-2015

---

reply by the author on 07-Jun-2015

Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine

Comment from mumsyone

Excellent

I'm sure Brooke will enjoy this picture of so many beautiful dandelions, accompanying your poem. Both are great tributes to her.

Lois

 Comment Written 30-May-2015

---

reply by the author on 07-Jun-2015

Thanks for your encouraging review. Elaine

Comment from GracieAnn

Excellent

memaids, this is a lovely and original write that honors Brooke so well. From the color to the flower it gives a glimpse of our gentle leader. Well done. :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 28-May-2015

---

reply by the author on 07-Jun-2015

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from inside echo

Excellent

A pretty poem and a sweet dedication for your friend. All the poems about dandelions and fairy dust, she really must love them. Thank you for sharing your poem. Well done.
echo

 Comment Written 28-May-2015

---

reply by the author on 07-Jun-2015

Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine

reply by inside echo on 07-Jun-2015

You're welcome.

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

This is a lovely message for Brooke. The dandelion is a good choice of focus for your poem. They bring out the sunshine that represents the light that Brooke brings with her poetry. We hope she will be back at it soon. Beautiful imagery in this of the dandelion fairy bringing treasures of the heart. judi

 Comment Written 28-May-2015

---

reply by the author on 07-Jun-2015

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

reply by judiverse on 07-Jun-2015

You're very welcome. judi

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello mermaids, Good way to describe Brooke as the
queen of dandelions when you said-

she is the dandelion
fairy of good wishes
and light dreams
gifts of sunshine
nature's gold

 Comment Written 28-May-2015

---

reply by the author on 07-Jun-2015

Love your review. Thanks so much. Elaine

reply by Gert sherwood on 07-Jun-2015

tou are welcome mermaid