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having fun with words34 total reviews
Comment from c_lucas
Dipper, zipper, clipper, flipper, nipper, ripper, sipper, tipper, (the beat goes own.) You did an excellent job with your acrostic poem. Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Dipper, zipper, clipper, flipper, nipper, ripper, sipper, tipper, (the beat goes own.) You did an excellent job with your acrostic poem. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 30-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Wow!!!!!!! Thanks so much for the six star rating, I really appreciate it. I didn't win the contest but I came in second. I am really glad you gave it a review. Blessings my friend. Portia
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You're welcome, Portia. Charlie
Comment from amahra
The art work is very well chosen, playful and very colorful. It makes me smile even before reading the poem. Very nice poem with nice, playful rhyming. Great job.
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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The art work is very well chosen, playful and very colorful. It makes me smile even before reading the poem. Very nice poem with nice, playful rhyming. Great job.
Comment Written 30-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Thanks so much for your rating, review and very kind comments; greatly appreciated. Portia
Comment from Zue65
Here is another creative poem written in compliance to a prompt. I commend poets like you who can create lines out of a fixed number of words from a prompt, I believe I will find it hard to do that. I can't write a poem when I am not inspired and I can't draw something out of a prompt. Congrats.
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Here is another creative poem written in compliance to a prompt. I commend poets like you who can create lines out of a fixed number of words from a prompt, I believe I will find it hard to do that. I can't write a poem when I am not inspired and I can't draw something out of a prompt. Congrats.
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Thanks so much for your review, rating and very kind comments; greatly appreciated. Portia
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The poem is very funny and cute! The author's words are humorous, engaging, and creative. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is perfect and compliments the theme of this poem.
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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Excellent Poem! The poem is very funny and cute! The author's words are humorous, engaging, and creative. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is perfect and compliments the theme of this poem.
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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Thanks so much for your rating, review and very kind comments. Greatly appreciated////Pharp
Comment from ravenblack
It is not about the win, but how you play the game. And the attitude that comes through in your well-penned acrostic shows that you are a winner. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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It is not about the win, but how you play the game. And the attitude that comes through in your well-penned acrostic shows that you are a winner. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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Thanks so much my friend, did not win, however; I had so much fun penning this poem. Actually, I did win because so many reviewers enjoyed this silly poem and got a laugh from it. . Therefore. I succeeded in what I wanted to do; bring a smile to someone's face. Thanks some much for your rating, review and very kind comments. LOL Portia
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
LOL. I enjoyed your poem so much. The picture is perfect. Your acrostic is great. I like the way you elaborated each line with something in reference to FanStory. Yes, I did peek at the ratings. I like what Nosha wrote, so I will not belabor the point. Good job and thanks for the laugh.
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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LOL. I enjoyed your poem so much. The picture is perfect. Your acrostic is great. I like the way you elaborated each line with something in reference to FanStory. Yes, I did peek at the ratings. I like what Nosha wrote, so I will not belabor the point. Good job and thanks for the laugh.
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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Thanks so much my friend, I am glad you enjoyed my silly poem. I am so grateful to Nosha for bringing the errors to my attention. I am glad you had a good laugh. lol Portia
Comment from Jackarrie
This is a great entry into the contest using specific words. this is challenging enough, but you chose to have an acrostic, a long one at that. I got a good laugh, I do believe that was your intention.
Well done, and good luck.
Mary
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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This is a great entry into the contest using specific words. this is challenging enough, but you chose to have an acrostic, a long one at that. I got a good laugh, I do believe that was your intention.
Well done, and good luck.
Mary
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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Yes, my intentions were to make those who reviewed to get a little laughter. I enjoyed writing it and I thank you for your rating. Review and very kind comments. lol Pharp
Comment from Nosha17
I liked the humour in your poem, spontaneously written with good use of rhyming and an acrostic as a bonus. Well chosen words and a fun read. I noted couple of things, line 3, learned. Line 5, I read poems/a poem. Verse 2, line 2, open mind. Most enjoyable. Faye
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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I liked the humour in your poem, spontaneously written with good use of rhyming and an acrostic as a bonus. Well chosen words and a fun read. I noted couple of things, line 3, learned. Line 5, I read poems/a poem. Verse 2, line 2, open mind. Most enjoyable. Faye
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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Thanks so much for your rating, review and very kind comments. I really appreciate you pointing out the errors made; greatly - greatly appreciated; corrections made. I am also glad you enjoyed the humor in my poem. lol Portia
Comment from royowen
A good Acrostic, they are not always easy to write, they usually take some thought, because you're stuck with a letter that is not easy to compose from, a bit you've done well, and it looks like you had a bit of fun doing it, I enjoyed your skill, and I enjoyed your good natured humour, well done and good luck, blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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A good Acrostic, they are not always easy to write, they usually take some thought, because you're stuck with a letter that is not easy to compose from, a bit you've done well, and it looks like you had a bit of fun doing it, I enjoyed your skill, and I enjoyed your good natured humour, well done and good luck, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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Thanks so much for your rating, review and very kind comments. I really did have fun writing this poem and I am glad you enjoyed the humor in it. Blessings my friend----Portia
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Most welcome
Comment from Pantygynt
All those words to include and an acrostic of your own choice too. Male and female rhyme internal and external too. Really excellent form and you worry about content! We don't understand half the stuff we read anyway. We just pretend we do and warble on about the sexual significance of the zipper and the cathartic effect of being flexible.
Brilliant!
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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All those words to include and an acrostic of your own choice too. Male and female rhyme internal and external too. Really excellent form and you worry about content! We don't understand half the stuff we read anyway. We just pretend we do and warble on about the sexual significance of the zipper and the cathartic effect of being flexible.
Brilliant!
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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Thanks so much for your very kind comments; made me feel good about my poem. LOL // Portia